A regret

[atlanta_latina]

Tell me wat ya think


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Thinkin Bout u reminising bout tha past
all those good times
we had it was a blast

Why didnt we go out
U n I were meant to be
but u chose that other guy,not me

How could you choose that otha guy
when u barely knew him
Wish u could be with me
so screw him

I love u i told u a million times
You told me u love me 2
but i never told u
How i felt about u

I wish i could have told u
But i didnt that was my mistake

Now that I lost u forever
i regret not sayin this:

I love you and only you,
I've loved you
since the first day
I met you.​

 

[3sa_Angel]

i liked it but ya say you to much i dunno i proally do it too pero simon......other then that i liked it....

 

[acuario5764]

^^^thats true

 

[atlanta_latina]

i liked it but ya say you to much i dunno i proally do it too pero simon......other then that i liked it....

yea i know i always say u too much pro thanx for tha comment

 

[3sa_Angel]

simon any time like i said other then that it were a good poem no doubt bout that.....

 

[Mr Unique]

i liked it but ya say you to much i dunno i proally do it too pero simon......other then that i liked it....

yea u did...m.mm...try replacing some of them "you"s with another word mayb his name or a synonym like..or rewrite 2 were u dont have put you in each sentence....but then again...if u kno whow 2 say it just right...the "you"s dont really matter...depends...Lol...other than that its a nice poem....

Ex....

original...

I love u i told u a million times
You told me u love me 2
but i never told u
How i felt about u​

improved...

I love u I said it a million times
And you repeated it too
But I never really got to tell you
How I really felt about u​

mmmm idk just a suggestion

 

[jenny_lovesyooh]

i love your poem its turth it fits for me

 

[LATINA4LIFE]

like It

 

[atlanta_latina]

thanx 4 da advice Mr Unique n thanx for tha comments

 

[Mr Unique]

thanx 4 da advice Mr Unique n thanx for tha comments

simon no prob it whats i do best.......1 love

 

[brina_bre4lyfe]

^ still a hell nice poem reminds me of something my homeboi would want to say