Bilingual Love Poem

[LA TRISTE]

Your smile is un rayo de sol
picked
from your sonrisa
planted as a seed
within the sun
of my soul
with an ardiente passion
ardent pasion
sparking into tierra de fuego
where mas is more
in a sea of si
full of the salt of sal
in the saliva of saliva
making thirst
asking not to be first.
Two tongues that meet
make not a kiss
but bilingual love.​

 

[3sa_Angel]

i gots kinda travada when i were reading it it wasnt your poem it were me lol..........pero i liked ya poem it were good........

 

[LA TRISTE]

thank you

 

[chicano]

Weird in a way, but I liked it's uniqueness.

 

[homie2007]

fucking awesome

 

[LA TRISTE]

THANK YOU VERRY MUCHO

 

[chika dulce]

nice nice

 

[Mr Unique]

nice poem...only thing about it...u put some english words where they shoulda been spanish and vice versa...kinda trew of course...but its a good poem in it self..

 

[blah]

That poem's in my old lit book. Jos^ Antonio Burciago, no?

 

[LADiiLUNii]

Is Goood