Deranged

[Dazed]

this burning sensation
lingers making the watery
substance form
tears???
i disowned you
this despondency that takes over
could never bring you back
ive turned immoral
and vain
i deserve what i seek
malignant to even the purest
of minds
quickly turn genuine thoughts
to sentiments of hate
i corrupt these sweet abstinent minds
and dispense a twisted wisdom
they crave
i feed them these malice thoughts
unknown to there mentality
i use them as implements
to a higher power
no longer an innocent thought
left in me
i let my mischievous influence
there demented actions
ive become numb
to sensitivity...or so i thought
the light in the victims mind
cathes my attention
making me hesitate
"no"
and i continue
dispensing this rage
making them as twisted as I

 

[MrCort3s]

WOW, great use of vocab, most people would not understand that, pero man its on a whole other level.

 

[Dazed]

haha thanks...

so that may explain why i got 13 views and only 1 reply...

but yea thanks!...i appreciate it..

 

[MrCort3s]

yes that probably does explain that.
i mean not many people know what despondency,malignant, malice,mischievous or cathes mean, if their not paying attention in english class.

 

[HomeyG]

its goood so is the one on your sig

 

[Dazed]

thanks..very much appreciated

and paul engle is a great writer..

 

[chicano]

Yup, on a whole new level. You make my poetry look like crap. Mad props on your firme poems, B.

Keep at it.

 

[Dazed]

aww dont say that...all poetry is good when its sincere and from the heart...

if you dont mean what you say...then they're just words...

thanks for the props..

 

[Verónica]

You Evil Girl!!!....lol...nah But On The Real Where You Get All This Anger From??

 

[Verónica]

Damn I Need A Thesaurus

 

[Dazed]

lol i dont know...im the type to hold everything in...so it just comes out in my writing..


awww...its always good to expand your vocab.

 

[Verónica]

....damn I'm Like That Too.....thats Why I Started Writing So Much Back In The Day....lol...i Was Always So Sad And Angry

 

[a_cute_jasmin]

Wow...Dazed you have some talent.

 

[Dazed]

thanks!