Emotional Exercise

[DaKing]

I act and retract
I relax and subtract on what people sacked
Into my personality, and what it's packed
It's a hard reality, but that's what it's been cracked
Is it love that stricken me? Or was it lust that attacked?
I retract, give a smack, and lack on what could be
Slack on what would be, and retract on what should be
I loosely tell her how I feel, the love reality
So much others in this society, never reaching my mentality
Bitches running after me, never falling with them, no quality
But I run for one, will I risk a love fatality?
So much differs from us, will she be after me?
It's a storm that I wish not to sail in
Struck down like lightning I would be doomed, I fear failing
I'm trailing, should we be together then?
Will I sail, when we both live near different oceans?
Will she do the same? Think of me as more than a friend?
But not only that, will I be the only one?
Or will I be the pawn to her games which she will have fun?
Nonetheless, I bare all arms to her, nothing is tricky
It is to you and for you...

 

[chicano]

You wrote this?

Because if you wrote this, you're really talented in poetry. I loved the poem.

 

[La peke]

That was a good poem.

 

[**MiSS 5o9**]

WOW I LOVE IT.. VERY NICE...!!!!

 

[ESA BABY GURL]

I Lk Ur Poem Daking

 

[Godruigez]

Very talented. At first, it seemed a little contrived with everything rhyming with attacked, but you switched it up just right. I really like stuff written in this style.

 

[DaKing]

Yeah it's kinda of a rap, I tried to make it have some sort of flow.. Thanks fr the positive feedback, and yeah i did make this..

WOW I LOVE IT.. VERY NICE...!!!!

 

[S!l3nTrZ]

I act and retract
I relax and subtract on what people sacked
Into my personality, and what it's packed
It's a hard reality, but that's what it's been cracked
Is it love that stricken me? Or was it lust that attacked?
I retract, give a smack, and lack on what could be
Slack on what would be, and retract on what should be
I loosely tell her how I feel, the love reality
So much others in this society, never reaching my mentality
Bitches running after me, never falling with them, no quality
But I run for one, will I risk a love fatality?
So much differs from us, will she be after me?
It's a storm that I wish not to sail in
Struck down like lightning I would be doomed, I fear failing
I'm trailing, should we be together then?
Will I sail, when we both live near different oceans?
Will she do the same? Think of me as more than a friend?
But not only that, will I be the only one?
Or will I be the pawn to her games which she will have fun?
Nonetheless, I bare all arms to her, nothing is tricky
It is to you and for you...

AWW... CHRIS THAT IS A VERY SWEET POEM..YU REALLY LIKE HER HUH
YOUR A LUCKY LADY....YEAH YUO!!! TAKE CARE OF HIM...

 

[chika dulce]

NICE POEM...

 

[**MiSS 5o9**]

Yeah it's kinda of a rap, I tried to make it have some sort of flow.. Thanks fr the positive feedback, and yeah i did make this..

 

[DaKing]

Hey, your name coincidentally with "tricky".

 

[**MiSS 5o9**]

Hey, your name coincidentally with "tricky".

LOL'Sz.... YOUR RITE IT DOES...!

 

[LATINA4LIFE]

G00D!G00D P0EM i LiKED iT