Fatherz........

[Lil Poet]

thiz iz for all u............ bastard ass fathers.................

Lifes a crazy thang full of pleasure full of pain,
grab a pencil and some paper, and use this pencil like my vein...
Blinded by her loneliness she dosen't use her brain,
she jumps into a taxi cab and even hopped a train,
dreaming of a meal as she's sleeping in the rain,
till she found her self in places that she never should have been.
Fatherz please hug your Daughters,
love them while you can,
it depends on you who they choose for a man,
show her that you love her, show her that you care
tell her how you feel so ascared when she ain't there.
you and her won't always be togeather,
once a girl goes bad that meanz she's gone for ever
If attentionz what she wants than attentionz what she'll get,
when she makes her own decisions than its too late for regret...........

 

[miss brujita 13]

DATZ TRUE I LIKED IT A LOT

 

[lil travieza]

hey love your poem thatz true once yo gon u can never go back

 

[3sa_Angel]

i dunno i cant really relate to this cuz i'm daddy's lil girl i'm all in his eyes even if i do wrong he dont see no wrong in me....so i dunno.....pero da poem was good............

 

[Verónica]

^^yup Same Here....i Can't Relate But I Know That Thats True^^...good Poem.....could Be Better Though

 

[Lil Poet]

Thanx..............i guess........

 

[*sUr13*pUpPeT*]

Me Gusta!

Me Gusta Todo!!! I Like That!!! My Dad Has Never Been There For Me Ever Since I Was Little But Now That He Is Really Sick He Wants To Be In My Life And I Talk To Him Now And I Let Him In My Life Even Though He Hasnt Been There But He Is Going Blind And Soon He Wont Be Here And Its Not Like Me To Hold A Grudge! Even If They Havent Been There For Me I Still Love Him He Is My Dad Either Way!! Tu Recuerdes!!! But I Aint Bad Though I Really Wish That Me And My Dad Could Have Had Those Talks And Father-daughter Dances And Do All That Father-daughter Stuff But Now I Dont Know I Am Still Mad At Him But I Am Learning To Forgive Him!! But It Will Take Time!!!well Anywhoz I Like That Poem!!!!

 

[3S4S4D3Y3Z]

dammn good ass poem!!
keep it up!
de veras i loved that poem
although it doesnt relate to me!
when u gonna teach me how to do
dem nice poemz u do!!

 

[a_cute_jasmin]

Damn girly.....I'm loving ya poem. It's hella tight. Keep it up!

 

[*Super Mayra*]

yea im not really daddy's girl but it was still nice...u know...keep it up.

 

[la smiley 13]

i love the poem man i can relate to it a bit cause my dad had been a good father but never really took time to talk to me and shit i like it its a really good poem