finish the poem..

[Leto]

Hey all, I must be hella bored today or something , but was thinking. I got this poem I started a long time ago , but never finished. (based onn actual events)
Anyway, it's called ridin the bus, and if any of you have had (bus ridin experiences) I was thinking everyone could just add on to the poem ,even one line or something and see how it comes out...... might be cool to see.


[RIDIN THE BUS]

6 in the morning - fingers is chillin,
homeboy, can't get the change - pockets is spillin,

findin the groove might not be just to EASY,
coffee was weak - and the homefries were Hella GREASY,

Back by the window hmm... a fine chick,...
..thinkin things might be groovy,
if we wern't IN this flic,
thought... I already saw this horror MOVIE,
DAMN.... i think the hunch back just set down next to ME!,

 

[Isha Baby]

It kinda gets mixed up at the end but I don't know wut to add to this...

 

[Isha Baby]

Ok fine here is my part.....

I was riding the bus,
and then the driver wanted to bust,
he looked at me funny,
do I have that big of a tummy???
He followed me around.
Damn I wanted to beat him to the ground.
He tried to grab my ass,
so I hid in the grass...lol

 

[Verónica]

lmao.....funny girl.....lol...

 

[Leto]

Ok fine here is my part.....

I was riding the bus,
and then the driver wanted to bust,
he looked at me funny,
do I have that big of a tummy???
He followed me around.
Damn I wanted to beat him to the ground.
He tried to grab my ass,
so I hid in the grass...lol

Your cracking me up here Isha.... .... that was probably better than my poem.[violent]
It doesn't really fit on the end of mine ..... but it's all good , we can do it that way.

 

[a_cute_jasmin]

Ok fine here is my part.....

I was riding the bus,
and then the driver wanted to bust,
he looked at me funny,
do I have that big of a tummy???
He followed me around.
Damn I wanted to beat him to the ground.
He tried to grab my ass,
so I hid in the grass...lol

LOL That is one funny poem.....

 

[*Super Mayra*]

Hey all, I must be hella bored today or something , but was thinking. I got this poem I started a long time ago , but never finished. (based onn actual events)
Anyway, it's called ridin the bus, and if any of you have had (bus ridin experiences) I was thinking everyone could just add on to the poem ,even one line or something and see how it comes out...... might be cool to see.


[RIDIN THE BUS]

6 in the morning - fingers is chillin,
homeboy, can't get the change - pockets is spillin,

findin the groove might not be just to EASY,
coffee was weak - and the homefries were Hella GREASY,

Back by the window hmm... a fine chick,...
..thinkin things might be groovy,
if we wern't IN this flic,
thought... I already saw this horror MOVIE,
DAMN.... i think the hunch back just set down next to ME!,

NOW THE HUNCH BACK IS STARING AT ME
I LOOKED BACK AND I START TO THINK "DID HE FALL FROM THE UGLY TREE"
AND THE OLD LADY IN FRONT OF ME SMILES AND WAVES
I START TRYING TO AVIOD HER FACE
HOPING IM NOT THE ONE SHE CRAVES..

UMM I CANT THINK OF ANYTHING ELSE...LOL BUT I TRIED...

 

[a_cute_jasmin]

Hey all, I must be hella bored today or something , but was thinking. I got this poem I started a long time ago , but never finished. (based onn actual events)
Anyway, it's called ridin the bus, and if any of you have had (bus ridin experiences) I was thinking everyone could just add on to the poem ,even one line or something and see how it comes out...... might be cool to see.


[RIDIN THE BUS]

6 in the morning - fingers is chillin,
homeboy, can't get the change - pockets is spillin,

findin the groove might not be just to EASY,
coffee was weak - and the homefries were Hella GREASY,

Back by the window hmm... a fine chick,...
..thinkin things might be groovy,
if we wern't IN this flic,
thought... I already saw this horror MOVIE,
DAMN.... i think the hunch back just set down next to ME!,

LOL the hunch back....how sad...funny though. Hmmmm how about

She looking like Quasimodo.......idk

 

[Leto]

NOW THE HUNCH BACK IS STARING AT ME
I LOOKED BACK AND I START TO THINK "DID HE FALL FROM THE UGLY TREE"
AND THE OLD LADY IN FRONT OF ME SMILES AND WAVES
I START TRYING TO AVIOD HER FACE
HOPING IM NOT THE ONE SHE CRAVES..

UMM I CANT THINK OF ANYTHING ELSE...LOL BUT I TRIED...

you tried ? .... that was pretty good girl..... you made me think I was back on that bus again. (there's a "nice" ol lady like that on every bus )

 

[Isha Baby]

lol but my poem is true...

 

[*Super Mayra*]

you tried ? .... that was pretty good girl..... you made me think I was back on that bus again. (there's a "nice" ol lady like that on every bus )

LOL.......