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BaBe4LiFe

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Why u hurt me?
Why u lie?
Your a fucking bitch tat always lies
You promise and promise
Day and night, but nothing comes true
You may laugh now, but at the end i'll be the one saying
GOOD-BYE!!!!!!!!! [wavey]
 
I'm not going to go and say "it was ok, but needs work" like some of the people above me.

What I will say is that this poem was complete garbage, and if you thought this poem was "good" enough to go in the "poem and literature section" then you should give up on poetry and save yourself the embaressment..
 
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