i cried, really, i died

[MrCort3s]

I cried You died
You saw the fear that was in here
Deep in my soul I was tormented
I was told I was demented
I cried as I saw you die.
This agony that is now part of me
I need to let it go or ill lose my soul
You don’t know how it feels
(screaming)
I just want to scream!! wake up from this fuck-ing dream!!
God!! help me!!
(sobbing)
I just don’t know what to do
I’m such a fool
(anguish)
There is so much I cant let go
And it eats away at me!
The pain!?!, fuck no!
It just wont let me be
I cant see, I cant be
I cant think, I wont blink
(desperation)
For ill be waiting
I know they're near
I can hear them here
(persistent)
I cocked the hammer
I pulled the trigger,
(earnest)
Hey I just figured
I would make a last stand
And be a man...

 

[S!l3nTrZ]

Wow ! MRCORT3S That was DEEP! I like it alot,

 

[chicano]

Nice poem, dumb ending.

 

[S!l3nTrZ]

Nice poem, dumb ending.

well maybe, yeah the ending was a not as good as the rest!! but still ok

 

[yankeegurl]

THAT WAS GANGSTA!

 

[LADiiLUNii]

I cried You died
You saw the fear that was in here
Deep in my soul I was tormented I was told I was demented
I cried as I saw you die.
This agony that is now part of me
I need to let it go or ill lose my soul
You don

 

[LADiiLUNii]

Hmmm I Lke It Per0 Y U End It Lke That? Could Hve Beem Mas C0m0

I Pulled The Trigger
I'm Fightin With Myself
(the Voice Inside Me)
Seconds Away From Pullin It
I Know It'll End The Pain
Am I Right?
Am I Wrong?
Fuck I Don't Even Know
(guilt)
Can I Be A Man And Pull It?
Or Will I Go Back To Crying N Hope
It Comes To An End?
I Cried, Really, I Died


Pero It Makes It Longer Ha Ha!

 

[ESA BABY GURL]

Hey Cortes It Me Lil A Hey I Lk Ur Poem

 

[**MiSS 5o9**]

ITS GOOD MARIO...!!!
TE DOY UN 10....!!!
HEHE....!!!