Jus somthin I wrote it anit that good bt I jus wana know wat ppl think

[Texas_Baby_Gurl]

Dear Lord, Dear God
Jus show me the light
That I need 2 get through the night
While I sleep
In the deep
With thought s only of my Love
True and white as a Dove
Who flys to the Heavens up above.
Dear Lord, Dear God
Keep my Love safe
For I can not go on without him
I have been told that love is a sin
Because Love only brings pain
With so many tears
That disappear
In the cold hard rain.
Dear Lord, Dear God
Why do I Love with all my heart
When in the end its left in the dark
I Love with Faith and Hope
That My Love still feels the same for me now
As he wrote
and told me
many long nights ago.
Dear Lord, Dear God
Let my thoughts come through
Let my wishes come true
Dear Lord, Dear God​

 

[htownzdulcenina]

its good i read it somewhere i cant remember where though

 

[[Lil Boo]]

^^^^ i read it somewhere too...but its tight

 

[getogirl]

Thats a realy good poem!!!

 

[Texas_Baby_Gurl]

Oh for real cuz I jus wrote tat from the the top of my head the other day.
N if some 1 else worte it I woulda given them the props.

 

[[Lil Boo]]

MAYBE iT WAS YOU BUT jUST WiT A DiFFERENT uSERNAME OR U POSTED iT SOMEWHERE ELSE....i DONT KNOW BUT i KNOW i READ iT BEFORE

 

[Selena y eber]

copyer dont b fake write ur own stuff

 

[pensativa_92113]

i like dis poem it SWEET!

 

[Lil Poet]

whatz up esa, Thiz iz Lil Poet. Hit my back if u wana here some of my rhmes. (dnavarro@cfhc.biz)

 

[NIKA]

Is A True Poem....... I Liked It A Lot

 

[NIKA]

I Need Yo People Opinion

MY BOYFRIEND DUMB ME FO NO REASON .... HE JUST DIDNT TELL ME ANYTHING... JUST IGNORIN MY PHONE CALLES ... I DONT IF ITS DUMBIN OR WAT I DONT KNO.... I STILL LOVE HIM N EVRYTHIN
SO WHAT DO YO'LL THINK I SHOULD DO?????????

 

[n3gra16]

it's a nic3 but trist3 po3m. oh my god!!

 

[La_Cholita]

Hey i like that poem