JuZt ThInKiNg 0f U

[Eza_Lil_b3tZy..]

LaYn H3R3 iN BeD
JuzT tHiNkInG 0f U.
WoNd3rInG iF u ThInKiNg 0f Me 2.
DaY dR3aMiNg Is WhAt I d0 24/7.
3V3r ZiNc3 u GoT LoCk3d Up.
R3m3NiZiNg AlL oF tHoS3 TiM3z
W3 TaLk3d On ThE pHoNe.
I miZz Ur VoIz3
CuAnDo Me DeZiAz I LoVe U, n WaNt 2 b WiTh U 4eVa.
I wAnT u 2 b MoR3 tHaN mY FrIeNd.
My WiFe, La MaMa D3 mIs HiJoz, EsTaR cOn TiGo Is AlL I wAnT 2 do.
P3nSaR eN aLl ThOs3 mOmEntZ mAk3 m3 f33L
HaPpY kNoWiNg ThAt U lOv3 m3 n StIlL wAnT m3.
ThAtz WhAt U tOlD m3 nOw, 4 m3 2 wAiT 4 u CuZ oUr LoV3 iS wOrTh WaItiNg 4.
BuT dOn'T wOrRy BaB3 i'M sTiLl HeRe WaItInG 4 u.
AlL tHoS3 mOm3nTz We'Ve TaLk3d HaV3 mAd3 m3 sTrOnG n NoT fAlL 4 nO oTh3r GuY, cUz I kNoW tHaT tOg3tHeR w3 r gOiNg 2 mAk3 iT tHrOuGh N hAv3 tH3 fAmIlY u'V3 aLWaYz WaNt3d.
N b WiT m3 N m3 wIt U.

 

[Tracalero]

Poetically, bah...the hard to read writing is bah too....

Nice sentiment tho, sigue being strong esperando your vato ^_^

Bienvenida a bp

 

[Eza_Lil_b3tZy..]

0h.....z0 N0 t Guzt0?

 

[**MiSS 5o9**]

I LIKE IT...!!
ITS GOOD...!!!
I MISS MA MAN TOO....!!!

 

[Tracalero]

Me gusto el sentimiento...pero no el estilo en q lo escribieras I have a thread around here about my thoughts on poetry

 

[Eza_Lil_b3tZy..]

Thx! i Hav3 M0r3 Ill WrIt3 Th3m AlrAt0! mAb3y UlL lIk3 tH3m! bUt Thnx 4 TaKiN uR tIm3 2 dRop It Dwn WiT a C0mM3nt! MwaZZ MiJa AlRatoz!!!!!

 

[yankeegurl]

ITS ALRIGHT!

 

[S!l3nTrZ]

Very nice poema!! keep it up..
{*To my baby:: I miss You*}

 

[**MiSS 5o9**]

OH N WELCOME TO BROWNPRIDE BETSY...!!!
YOU'LL LIKE IT HERE...!!!
N KEEP POSTIN UP POEMS...!!

 

[Eza_Lil_b3tZy..]

ThNx! GlAd DaT u LiK3d It!

 

[3sa_Angel]

es a good poem and es coo that you be waiting for your man..........thas a true hyna right thir.........es coo es a good poem girl keep it up..........

 

[Eza_Lil_b3tZy..]

ThNx Mja! iM gLad k T t gUzt0! GrAzIaZ x El CoMm3nt!

 

[chicano]

Something about this poem cacthed my attention. I liked the feelings you put into it.

Keep up the good work.

 

[browneyez13]

hey gurl i liked da oem i kno how ufeel i'v been put in dat siuation 2 all i cn say iz dnt ever give up n never stop writin cuz it really doez help 2 get all ur feelings out trust me i have a bunch of notebooks fiiled wit ma poems pero i da kno keep in toutch keep it real n *GOD BLESS*

 

[Eza_Lil_b3tZy..]

0h R3aLly Mij0! W3lL tHnx 4 Dr0pPing By WiT a C0mM3nT!

 

[GIGGLES_IE]

I Like It Esa I ReaLLy Do Keep It Coming