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Long Distant Lover (Poem) Tell Me Wat U Think

LONG DISTANT LOVER

I met you by a friend and all you said was "we'll be together until the end" at first we started as good friends....then became Long Distance lovers. you were very far from me and I always that lil thought we just cant be. but you changed that how? I'm not sure... God I remember all those nights we talked, cried laughed,and played around for hours, we would be on the phone until we we herd that dead battery sound after a while I new,new the truth why I couldn't stop thinking about you and that's cause I fell in love with you... oh god can this be true it's like yesterday I was blue and now I'm deep in love with you then you said soon we'd get married under that beautiful blue moon and receive our little angel from above....I has been three mouths and we are both happier than ever I remember that night I wished upon a star just to see you,be with you,Touch you and feel your warmth next to me, but you were thousand miles away till that day you told me we'd be together always and for ever then our story felt like a sad love song and the pain I felt never seemed to stop. Can this be Mi Amor? are you leaving me?... I guess I wasn't good enough for him, but How? I gave him all my love, my heart rested in his hands. I would give it all for him and all he said was " I'm sorry in love, I hope you could understand and see that this lady here is my wife to be" my heart fell and shattered as I herd these words and all I could say was congratulations I hope your happy...I wish you the best... I hung up the phone and stared to cry, I don't know why, why he left me for that other lady. On God it hurts so much I gave this man everything I never asked for this feeling this was our 6 mouths together and now we are both far away can never see each other why did I let you get to me I'm so Nineveh its been 3 days and everything reminds me of you every time I think about you my heart gets weak hoe can you just leave me I thought you loved me? I never thought I'd fall but now I miss you so much I wonder hoe it feels to have your touch I gave everything to you but you never noticed, every day every night I cry sometimes I just want to die. I'm sick of this and I wish it can all be a dream, but it seems it's not. My thoughts are mixed with love and hatred every night I pray and say god bless him and please let him know I love him with all my heart, but tonight it's time, time for me to move on I found someone new...It's hard but it's true I'm Not blue so tonight is the night lord I pray and say "to night is the last night that I will remember and get over my Long Distant Lover.

Let me know what you think
 
I Felt The Pain Too. I'm Sorry. First Love Always Hurts. Well, I Don't Know Pero, That's What People Say And Through Your Poem, I Feel Your Pain. Damn, Now You Made Me Sad!!!! Nah I'll Be Alright And So Will You. :) Laterzz Chica
 
Damn........

Dats good i feel ya pain too I mean I remember I had a relationship like dat but when we saw eachother again we didn't go together we were two completely different people and pues we had to go opposite directions even though I knew after everything we had gone through I still knew that whenever we would say "If its meant to be, we'll be" wasn't really true because we both came to realize that we were'nt meant to be and yea I beleive that things do happen for a reason...I kno it's sad but dats real...asi es la vida so **** it now I wanna seee life as an adventure pero para que am I gon' be breakin hearts so ya kno well dats it...Good Luck
 
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Reminds me of...

hEy wHaT's uP! Dis is yo gurl SHAwty! Yo poem was tyte n it reminds me of my nigga (he's my sistas ex husbands nephew) from Miami. I've known dis nigga since i was a lil' jit. He's always had a crush on me, but i neva paid no mind to him until 3 1/2 yrs. ago we started talkin' n we got a lot of shit n common, so dat's ko. I hadn't seen dat nigga n like 6 yrs. until dis past summa i split to Miami n i saw him. i was like damn nigga. Gurl dis nigga looked fine azz fuk, that nigga had changed a lot since da last tyme i saw him, but i didn't care cuz i know he's mine. Until dis day, i still talk to him n i can't wait til July so i can kick it wit him, if u kno what i mean! No matta who i'm wit, dis nigga's always gonna be n my mind n dat's real. N he's a nigga i can say dat's REAL! Even da nigga i'm wit right now ova hur n texas knows about us two, like i said i don't gotta hide shit from n e nigga, i'll tell da nigga straight up! Shit if dey don't like it,well... fuk it, i still got my babyboy!
 
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dam dis is real touchy. very sad. i could literally feel ur pain. its always hard to have a long distant lover cuz most of tha time it never turns out good one person always ends up gettin hurt. but dam i have a long distant lover to & i hope i see him dis summer. he says well be juntos forever & dat im his future wife. it just gets me teary wen i hear him say dat. its barely been a month & im so inlove wit him i hope nothing changes between us. i feel just like u in dha beginning of tha poem. keep up da good work =]
 
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