My Baby Sister

[yankeegurl]

I WAS WALKING HOME FROM A PARTY THAT NIGHT

I WAS WITH MY SISTER HOLDIN HER TIGHT

I WAS A LIL SHAKY, I WAS A LIL SCARED

BUT TO WALK THRU THAT ALLEY I SHOULD'VE NEVER DARED

I WASNT EVEN THINKING, MY SISTER WAS ONLY 4

I JUST REMEMBER HER FALLING TO DA FLOOR

IF FELT LIKE JUST A DREAM, SEEING THE CAR SPEED AWAY

I HAD A FEELING MY SISTER WASNT OKAY

I SAW THE BLOOD BUT I DIDNT KNOW Y

TILL I SAW HER FACE, SHE GOT SHOT IN DA EYE

I SAT THERE A WHILE JUST WANTING TO DIE

HOLDING HER AND ALL I DID WAS CRY

I REMEMBER THE AMBULANCE COMING TO HER

I STILL REMEMBER THAT SAME SPOT WHERE WE WERE

I'LL NEVER 4 GIVE MYSELF FOR THAT DAY

WHEN THEY TOOK MY BABY SISTER AWAY!!!!!
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[liil_mamii_01]

DAM3 DAT PO3M GAV3 M3 TH3 CHILLS I WOULD F33L TH3 SAM3 WAY IF MY BAB BRO DI3ED....

 

[La peke]

Thats sad, but i liked how you wrote it.

 

[3sa_Angel]

awww.........i'm sorry for your loss..........it brought a tear to my eye..........good poem.............sad but good...........

 

[a_cute_jasmin]

Omg.....Im actually crying now. Im sorry for your loss and I know how it is to loss a person you love. Keep up the good work on your poems.

 

[LatinaPlaylicio]

You Gave Me The Chills

 

[**MiSS 5o9**]

AWWW.. DAT WAS SAD...!!
GOOD POEM DOE...!!!!

 

[chicano]

Is this poem true?

It was really sad, but I liked it a lot.

 

[yankeegurl]

YEAH...ITS TRUE...I BLAME MYSELF FOR IT EVERY SINGLE DAY BUT THATS NOT GOING TO BRING HER BACK....I MISS HER SO MUCH!

 

[chicano]

You shouldn't blame yourself.

You were just in the wrong place at the wrong time, it wasn't your fault. May she rest in paradise.

 

[S!l3nTrZ]

very good poem, but also very sad!