my good byes(my first vesion)

[mz. lilchicana]

All my love and happiness has gone
No joy 2 bring 2 my song
life vanishing,draining my soul
no warmth,life takes it's toll
As my body lies here aching
Ready 4 death 2 do the taking
one last flicker of my eyes
and time 2 say my last good-byes

 

[LindasPoetry]

Nice poem...sad though, but sounds good.

 

[~Baby Cake~]

Dat's like a sad poem....but it was good.

 

[lupe Flores]

shit thats really nice I bet thats what a lot of people feel when they r gonna die