my story

[maria hernandez]

this is a story of a little girl who lived in a lonly wrold she hadn't known a secret crush a little boy who talked 2 much well i'm standing in the crowed and when u smile i check u out bu u don't even know ma name u're 2 busy playing games. and i want u 2 know if u lose u're way i'll always b there 4 u if i chane my cloths wil u notice me if i pperse my nose if i say hello will u notice me wats it gonna take 4 u 2 see i want u 2 notice me

 

[ESA_GIGGLESX3]

Damn It Was Nice
Hopefully Guys Read This And Start To Understand

 

[ADAM]

Wow I don't know what to say other then good job and keep it up. A guy who doesn't notice you is not worth your time. The only way you can get him to notice you is by telling him what you feel.

 

[la_bad_snuggles]

Check Dis Out You Can Give It A Bit Mo And Keep Trying But You Wen The Time Comes You No It Aint Worth Any More Time And The Tables Will Change You Will See...............

 

[chicano]

Your poetry was just as bad as your spelling.

 

[ESA BABY GURL]

Dis Is Good I Lk It But Watch Out For Ur Word K

 

[**MiSS 5o9**]

S0RRY PER0 N0 ENTENDI NADA..

 

[YAYA]

DAMMM DATS FUCKED UP CHICAN0..
BT LIKE VICKY SAID I DNT GET
IS IT EVEN A P0EM?..KEEP 0N TRYIN

 

[Tony602]

man a poem can be anything expressin a feelin it doesnt have to rhyme or sound like other poems all u need is an idea and spell check or something like that

 

[JAGUAR PAW]

this is a story of a little girl who lived in a lonly wrold she hadn't known a secret crush a little boy who talked 2 much well i'm standing in the crowed and when u smile i check u out bu u don't even know ma name u're 2 busy playing games. and i want u 2 know if u lose u're way i'll always b there 4 u if i chane my cloths wil u notice me if i pperse my nose if i say hello will u notice me wats it gonna take 4 u 2 see i want u 2 notice me

Loved it thanks for sharing.

 

[oskr629]

awww it's sweet

 

[josue flores]

this is a story of a little girl who lived in a lonly wrold she hadn't known a secret crush a little boy who talked 2 much well i'm standing in the crowed and when u smile i check u out bu u don't even know ma name u're 2 busy playing games. and i want u 2 know if u lose u're way i'll always b there 4 u if i chane my cloths wil u notice me if i pperse my nose if i say hello will u notice me wats it gonna take 4 u 2 see i want u 2 notice me

nice i guess

 

[Foxy_Lady]

It wuz really nice chica.​

 

[BabYGirL_4Eva]

It Needs Sum Lil More Work Keep On Workin

 

[maria hernandez]

Dadyys lil girl

daddys lil girl sitis and wounders
thinks if shell ever find a guy who she can talk to
she lyk this guy
but momy tells her that hes not right
daddy in jail tells her just not to fuck up her life
the homies help her stay on track
her sister just is a pain in the ass
her homegirls always tell her that what ever she needs they wil be their
she is just blesed to be living day by day
waking up each morning and wachng the sunset
but daddys lil girl knows what to do with her life
shes gang be with that guy no matter what people say or do. If it will last for ever then it will. And happpy together with him she wants to be