No le agas Da?o a mi corazon

[~Baby Cake~]

Dis is something I wrote when I was with my ex vato Jay J so it's pretty old lol I was pooring out my feelings so It might sound a bit confusing.....anyways jus tell me what you guys think...and be honest I won't mind knowing da truth.


No le agas Daño a mi Corazon

A feeling of a feeling, I’m serious this is what I'm feeling.
I feel you pass by, with no hi or a bye....

My love quickly growing but fading in time...
STOP!.... don’t do this....don’t let me go...
don’t let me fall into that big black hole...
a never-ending fall...with no base but just a phase..

I have you in my mind...that I cant deny..
your a picture that I will never let go...
I will always grab a hold
your name so clear and dear to me...

Te amo ........siempre te amare...
yo a ti nunca te dejare
solo te dije que te despresio y te odio
era como cualquier otro dia....
donde pensastes que tenia solo odio
pero en serio te adoro
y de ti por siempre me enamoro...

crazy thoughts run through my head
I’m sorry for what I said
not once, not twice, but 3 times
you put me in a phase of jealous times

Jealousy!!!!!!!! I feel....!!!!!!!
I felt, and I delt with
remember the day you called in that girl?
that BITCH with the curls...

I felt bad...not always knowing if what I had......I HAD?
well to bad...

My love is still here, hurting me so deep inside...
don’t just push me aside...

Listen to ME...
I beg on my knees
...not really loving to plea

just talk it out with me
I want to see!!!!
I want to feel free
please babe please...
ya no quiero sentirme muerta por ti
dejame sobrevivir
dime lo que piensas de mi
y dejame ser free...

 

[acuario5764]

thats a good poem it just got me confused in some parts

 

[**MiSS 5o9**]

i liked it. its good!

 

[~Baby Cake~]

Thanks for your feedback I really appreciate it...

 

[a_cute_jasmin]

I guess nessa...you know how to write lol I like it....it's good. So do you still feel like that about Jay J? You don't have to answer me if you don't want to, but good poem.

 

[LATINA4LIFE]

sis good poem me like it ya in sum parts it was confusin pero good peom....im back lol

 

[~Baby Cake~]

I guess nessa...you know how to write lol I like it....it's good. So do you still feel like that about Jay J? You don't have to answer me if you don't want to, but good poem.

No I don't feel like dat no more about dat bitch..he can go shove a pickle up his ass for all I care....so does dat answer your question chica.

 

[~Baby Cake~]

sis good poem me like it ya in sum parts it was confusin pero good peom....im back lol

AWWWWWWwwww my sis back lol so how was it down there...did you have fun?

 

[lupe Flores]

Esta Chido

 

[~*Lil_Lokita*~]

i like ur poem gurl nice!!!

 

[S@D 3Y3Z]

dma chica this is wayyy 2 good...i love it while i wuz reading it i swear i almost cryed lol i lovez it its real good

 

[LA_BABY_LOCS]

yeah thats a really good poem

 

[h town chica]

I got confused a little but yea overall it was good