Pay back

[Lil Poet]

Dedicated 2 my brother from another mother.............


As the car rode by,
i felt death flow by,
so i
ran down down the block,
then i seen th Lac' stop,
heard the mack pop,
my homeboy was killed by a cop who sells rocks,
i feel my tears drop as i touch his black box,
i cant talk 2 cops
so i go and steel a shot gun from my homeboyz popz,
i killed about three of them wit just one shot,
gettin high woundering will it ever stop..........

 

[Selena y eber]

that shit is so good i like it alot

 

[3sa_Angel]

damn deep and sad...pero me gusto...no doubt....

 

[Mr Unique]

damn deep and sad...pero me gusto...no doubt....

mmmm i didnt think it was too deep....simple too....but its alright...pretty good 4 starts

 

[Lil Poet]

Hey thiz iz Lil Poet calling out "Unique"
If you a real G than letz battle rap,
or els shut the fuck up.................

 

[Mr Unique]

Hey thiz iz Lil Poet calling out "Unique"
If you a real G than letz battle rap,
or els shut the fuck up.................

hha...shut the fuk up....you cant take a lil positive feedback then stop posting ur shit up...and no I aint no G...

 

[Lil Poet]

Dont get scared bitch, if i want your opinion i'll ask for it.

 

[Mr Unique]

Dont get scared bitch, if i want your opinion i'll ask for it.

LOl...aint no1 scared....orale ill play along w/ u...set a topic....theres a reason u post...its called a PUBLIC thread...

 

[3sa_Angel]

hey sup wit all da hostilaty leave dat too chukie...............
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[Lil Poet]

Por que me tienes seloz
I only trust my weboz,
te buelo los sesos,
desago te tus restos,
and keep ganando pesos.
Nick, Nack, Pady Wack,
i alwayz pack a chrome,
A chrome microphone sending all u phonies home.

 

[Mr Unique]

Por que me tienes seloz
I only trust my weboz,
te buelo los sesos,
desago te tus restos,
and keep ganando pesos.
Nick, Nack, Pady Wack,
i alwayz pack a chrome,
A chrome microphone sending all u phonies home.

im off 2 lunch post mine up l8r...

 

[Lil Poet]

LOL.................

 

[3sa_Angel]

hey lil poet come on hommie dont be dat way...Mista was only sayin some feedback es da whole reason why you post peoms up rite es da whole reason why we all post poems up to see what others think...es all part of it we gots to learn how to get good/bad feedback...and he said it were positive feedback...dont take it da wrong way hommie...

 

[Lil Poet]

Simon..........My bad....... .........we all get mad at timez que no?

 

[3sa_Angel]

simon we do...but sometimes we gots to take it like real men or women..

 

[Lil Poet]

4 sho'.......

 

[Mr Unique]

Por que me tienes seloz
I only trust my weboz,
te buelo los sesos,
desago te tus restos,
and keep ganando pesos.
Nick, Nack, Pady Wack,
i alwayz pack a chrome,
A chrome microphone sending all u phonies home.

orale im back...

You call your self a poet
Yet you getting but hurt over a lil comment, homito dont get wet
You dont come close to my technique
I'll split you lyrics wig, simon thats Unique
You say you got balls, you got heart
I'm the blood that pumps through your veins until you depart
You Minny Mouse compared to what I spit
The only reason your writing is because I allow it, when I say quit, you quit
My words are the Egyptian whip slashing your back
Making you shiver and convulse like an overdose of crack
I'm King Kong, your George the Curious Monkey
Verbs that flow, so fat I'll make you chuncky
Then turn Hitler on you, and Holocaust on your speech
Leave you clear of any meaning like bleach
I'm your life's leech
Sucking your energy out as I preach

 

[3sa_Angel]

ppl ppl calm down...dont be hatin on each other.....

 

[Mr Unique]

ppl ppl calm down...dont be hatin on each other.....

aint no1 hating....we just battling...its an art....aint no hard feelings...atleast not 4rm my part 1) its the net 2) like i sad we battling thats y we dont it this way so that we DONT get 2 the point were its like fuk so an d so on....

 

[3sa_Angel]

oh aight den just double chekin............... in dat case continue.......