Riding With Pride

[bugsy915]

Riding High With Pride,
A Bandana On My Head,
My Stereo Is Crankin' Out Some Oldie Tunes,
My Brown Goddess Is Sittin' Shotgun,
A Beautiful Blue Sky, And The Weather Is Seventy Five,
Life Couldn't Be Better,
On Our Way To The Carniceria To Buy Some Meat To Throw On The Grill,
Picking Up Some Brew For Me And My Homies, So We Can Relax After A Long Weeks Work.
Now We Are Chilling At My Pad, Got My Homies And Their Chavitos Playing Out In The Frontyard,
As I See Them I Think To Myself How I Would Like To Have A Son Of My Own One Of These Days.
Hey Homeboy Do You Remember When...
Was The Topic Of Conversation,
Reminacing About When We Were Chavitos,
Hey Remember We Went To That Dance And You Hooked Up With That Chick... Well I Didn't Want To Tell You Then, But She Looked Like A Changa Vato, Man She Was Ugly...
What Good Times We Had Ese.
Hey Baby How About Another Brew,
What A Beautiful Women, I'm Really A Lucky Vato,
As I See Her Walking Towards Me With A Smile On Her Pretty Brown Face,
I Extend My Arms To Embrace Her Gorgeous Body, I Want To Tell Her How Much I Love Her And How Lucky I Am.
I Hear A Pop, Followed By Another And Another,
I Embrace My Hayna, And Whisper That It Is Going To Be O.k, She Tells Me I Love You, And Your Unborn Son I'm Carrying Inside Loves You Too.
I Held Her Close, But The Tighter I Gripped Her The Quicker I Was Losing Her.
She Was Gone...
I Yelled, Dios Por Que, Why Did You Take My Ruca And My Unborn Baby From Me? I Work Hard, I'm A Good Man, Why God, Why?
I Reached For My Head To Pull My Hair Out, Instead I Pulled Off A Rag. A Red Rag.
And Then I Realized Why I Had Lost It All. For A Color...a Pinche Color.

 

[~Baby Cake~]

Your poem is good......It's also really sad. Then again funny. I'm sorry for being nosy, but did you loose your lady and unborn baby in real life? If you don't want to tell me I understand. I hope your better and all I want to say is that I wish the best for you and i'm glad to know that you noticed that bangng a color and symbol is not the way to live.......take care and I senf hugz and kisss. Muahz....

 

[bugsy915]

re: hello baby cake.

Your poem is good......It's also really sad. Then again funny. I'm sorry for being nosy, but did you loose your lady and unborn baby in real life? If you don't want to tell me I understand. I hope your better and all I want to say is that I wish the best for you and i'm glad to know that you noticed that bangng a color and symbol is not the way to live.......take care and I senf hugz and kisss. Muahz....

no girl, i didn't ,but there are alot of good people out there that have lost loved ones over some dumb shit. us chicanos should stick together not fight one another. i'm glad that you think that banging a color is not the way of life. i only wish that more young chicanos and chicanas thought the same way.

i'm glad you liked my poem, i know it's kinda rough to read, but i didn't get a chance to edit it. when i'm done with it i'll repost it. do you write too?

anyway take care.

 

[Westside 18]

dont mean to hate but at least half of it isnt even a poem.

 

[bugsy915]

dont mean to hate but at least half of it isnt even a poem.

yeah i know homeboy, it's work in progress. next time i won't post a rough draft. thanx for your comment.

 

[a_cute_jasmin]

That is sad....I like the part about the home boy getting with that one ugly girl who looks like a changa.....lmao Anyways I like the meaning to it and pos I thought it was aight and yeah maybe next time you should post up the final and not the rough Draft.

 

[bugsy915]

thanks for the advice girl, and i will, i just didn't think alot of people were going to read it.

anyway take care!

 

[~Baby Cake~]

Hi

no girl, i didn't ,but there are alot of good people out there that have lost loved ones over some dumb shit. us chicanos should stick together not fight one another. i'm glad that you think that banging a color is not the way of life. i only wish that more young chicanos and chicanas thought the same way.

i'm glad you liked my poem, i know it's kinda rough to read, but i didn't get a chance to edit it. when i'm done with it i'll repost it. do you write too?

anyway take care.

Yeah that is like so true what you said. It's stupid to claim and yes all us chicano people should stick together instead of killing each other. Anyways yeah I use to write poems, but that was when i was all down and sad. Since then i haven't wrriten any poems. I tend to talk to my sis and cousin if not my best friend lol So yeah next time repost the final lol I would like to see it later on when your done with it haha. Well talk to ya later and take care!

Muahz

 

[bugsy915]

Yeah that is like so true what you said. It's stupid to claim and yes all us chicano people should stick together instead of killing each other. Anyways yeah I use to write poems, but that was when i was all down and sad. Since then i haven't wrriten any poems. I tend to talk to my sis and cousin if not my best friend lol So yeah next time repost the final lol I would like to see it later on when your done with it haha. Well talk to ya later and take care!

Muahz

yeah baby girl, thanx for your comment. you don't have to be sad to write a poem, it just has to come from the heart. if you have talent, share it with the world. someone will listen. take care little homegirl.