so u feel u wanna tame me

[4oldndns]

slap me
make me feel ashamed
redicule me
again and again
take me out for the evening
feed me some crumbs
lie to me
mark me with your seed
in my womb
keep me down
no harmony
call me puta -pendeja
i am whatever u want me to be
control me with your eyes
gag me and blind me
i never wanted to fly
never wanted to try
tell me to wear what
what to wear
underwear eaten by you
seduced me
pull my hair
push me
kick me when i'm down
fix my frown
take me around
and around
introduce me to chiva
in my viens
history
histeria
prostitute me
chew me up
spit on me
sex me
tame me
lead me
put me in the back room
mushroom me
clone me
so u can own me
tag me
with all
your heart
hone me​

 

[ElDominicano]

Not sure if you wrote that, but that was impressive, and I've never said that about anyone's poetry on BP.

 

[fish_surf]

Outstanding!!

 

[4oldndns]

[wavey]thank-you darleens...yes it is my material-writings- what i do.
D

 

[JagPaw99]

gag and blind you huh.

nice work 4olds.

 

[4oldndns]

yup[kiss]