suicide @ 14

[areli]

she was a very special gurl
every body here liked her
she had the looks she had the guy
even getting straight "A" was no surprise
there was nothing wrong with this picture when it came to her
she was the ultimate one
but i guess she didnt enjoy all the fame
she hated being so perfect
even she thinks her boyfriend is not all that
one night while her mother was a sleep
she went into the kitchen and pulled out a knife
she was crying as she holded it
knowing that at the end of life
she was gonna go the other way
the next day they found her on the floor
with some pills that were all scattered
her mother called the ambulance
announcing her child was overdosed
by the time the ambulance came
the daughter didnt make it
NOW today on her tombstone she is known
as the gurl who didnt enjoy her perfect life
and thats why she committed " suicide @ 14"
​

 

[GIGGLES_IE]

how sad but she should have enjoyed of what she had..ppl would have killed to have a life like hers but thats the way it is

 

[~*Lil_Lokita*~]

Sad Poem Neta Nunca Estamos Happy Con La Vida Q Tenemos

 

[Isha Baby]

Sad Poem Neta Nunca Estamos Happy Con La Vida Q Tenemos

^^^^ that is so true but I would never want to be that perfect either. but I wouldn't kill myself for it..

 

[**MiSS 5o9**]

how sad!!!
yup yup were never satisfied with wat we got!!!

 

[green_eyes0021]

How Sad U R Going To Make Vicky Cry Lol

 

[**MiSS 5o9**]

lol!!!
i knw she is huh???
yeah i knw im such a llorona!!!!

 

[green_eyes0021]

Lol U Are Not Baby

 

[**MiSS 5o9**]

yeah huh!!!
n u knw dat well!!!
u knw i cry fo evrything!!! lol'z
lol oh well asi soy!!!

 

[green_eyes0021]

Yea I Asi Te Amo

 

[**MiSS 5o9**]

lol'z
awww i love u too!!!
u just perfect da way u are!!!!
i lubb'z u babii!

 

[green_eyes0021]

No Im Not But Thankx Lol Making Me Blush

 

[**MiSS 5o9**]

lol!!!!
awww u blushing!!!!!!
yes u r mister!!!

 

[green_eyes0021]

Lol Ok

 

[SMOK3Y]

its naice but sad lol

 

[chicano]

she was a very special gurl
every body here liked her
she had the looks she had the guy
even getting straight "A" was no surprise
there was nothing wrong with this picture when it came to her
she was the ultimate one
but i guess she didnt enjoy all the fame
she hated being so perfect
even she thinks her boyfriend is not all that
one night while her mother was a sleep
she went into the kitchen and pulled out a knife
she was crying as she holded it
knowing that at the end of life
she was gonna go the other way
the next day they found her on the floor
with some pills that were all scattered
her mother called the ambulance
announcing her child was overdosed
by the time the ambulance came
the daughter didnt make it
NOW today on her tombstone she is known
as the gurl who didnt enjoy her perfect life
and thats why she committed " suicide @ 14"
​

This sounds more like a news report then an actual poem.

 

[HomeyG]

this is not a poem