Survive

[LA ENANA]

TRYING TO SURVIVE
TO KEEP ALIVE
GROWIN UP POOR
WITH NOT MUCH MORE
LIVING IN A WORLD OF FANTASY
SOMEONE ELSES FANTASY


TRYING TO SURVIVE
KEEPING THAT HUSTLE
TO MAKE THAT MONEY
ONLY TO BE LONELY
HAVING A HONEY
WITH NO MORE LOVE TO ME


TRYING TO SURVIVE!!!!![wavey]

 

[chicano]

The poem was just bad.

 

[HomeyG]

i didnt like at all some parts didnt sound right

 

[theoriginalman]

I like your poem because of the title. Most people talk about dead homies, suicide, la raza, cheating boyfriends and girlfriends but yours has a positive meaning to it. The main goal is to SURVIVE...

 

[LA ENANA]

I like your poem because of the title. Most people talk about dead homies, suicide, la raza, cheating boyfriends and girlfriends but yours has a positive meaning to it. The main goal is to SURVIVE...

TY FOR UNDERSTANDING MY FORM OF THINKING

 

[GIGGLES_IE]

it was alright still a thumbs up

 

[LA ENANA]

it was alright still a thumbs up

THANK YOU

 

[LA ENANA]

The poem was just bad.

BAD IN WHICH WAY YOU HAVE TO KNOW WHAT
IT MEANS TO APPRECIATE IT. POEMS ARE MEANT TO HAVE HIDDEN MEANINGS

 

[LA ENANA]

i didnt like at all some parts didnt sound right

POEMS HAVE HIDDEN MEANINGS

 

[theoriginalman]

Your welcome...