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&& iiV3 L0ST MY J3FiiT0 T0 SUiiCiiD3
ii PUT A FR0NT UP S0 3V3RY0N3 THiiNKZz iiM FiiN3
BUT iiF Y0U L00K iiNT0 MY 3Y3Zz
D0WN T0 TH3 D3PTHZz 0F MY H3ART
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ii WiiSH ii C0ULD Dii3 && S3T MY W0RRii3Zz FR33
BUT THAT AiiNT TH3 ANSW3R S0 ii TAK3 iiN THiiS B33R && W33D
iiT H3LPZz M3 F0RG3T AB0UT THiiS SHiiT
S0 ii TAK3 A PUFF 0F THiiS B0WL AS iiT G3TZz LiiT
iiM F33LiiNG G00D N0W N0THiiNG 0N MY MiiND
BUT W0ND3RiiNG H0W L0NG THiiS iiS G0NNA MAK3 M3 F33L FiiN3
iiT D03SNT LAST L0NG 3N0UGH
N0W ii CAN F33L PAiiN AGAiiN AS TH3 G00D F33LiiNG FAD3Zz AWAY
iiM W0ND3RiiNG iiF THiiSLL B3 US3D AGAiiNST M3 0N JUDG3M3NT DAY
0H W3LL iiTZz MY PAST && WATZz D0N3 iiS D0N3
iiT'SS ALL F33L G00D AGAiiN AFT3R iiM D0N3 WiiTH THiiS BLUNT
ii'LL K33P PRAYiiNG F0R TH0S3 L00KiiNG D0WN 0N M3
&& ii'LL K33P S3NDiiNG Y0U'Zz MY L0V3
ii JUST KNOW 0N3 DAY 3V3NTUALLY
ii'LL B3 WiiTH Y0U'Zz iiN TH3 H3AV3NZz AB0V3

 

[chicano]

It was kinda hard to read, but I got through it, but you know what Traviesa? Your poetry is real good...you have some talent. Just try to think of some other topics besides "sur, drugs, and killing" and you'll have some really good poetry.