Tears On A Valentine...

[MZ_SHYON3]

here i em alone still thinkin of u
after all there months i still miss u
i feel so stupid bcuz i still love u
i hate that i still have feelings for u
and that is all true
shit im such a fool
here u r with ur new girlfriend
and what i have for u jus has 2 end
my love is somthin i dont jus lend
and my heart u jus bend
u brake it each and every day
look at it bcuz here i let it lay
notice me for once
and recongnize wat u have done
dam i feel so dum
here u go off with ur new lady
and i still think of u daily
its valentines day
and here i stay
jus me by myself
with tears on my faice
todo por ti
reconose lo que te di
mi corozon entero
y estas clavado en el mero centro
i hate this feeling
look at wat im deeling
u get 2 b happy 2 day
and b with ur new love
and me bye myself
with a broken heart...

 

[lonely_girl]

man i now how that feels. but you still have friends that you can go out with today.

 

[luv hurts]

dam dat poem is tru cuz all love is is jst a lie n i feel yo pain cuz im goin thru da same thang n yup yup luv hurts like a bithc n its all a lie!!!!!!!!

 

[htownzdulcenina]

i know how this feels
its really nice
propz

 

[mamaZz124]

shit i know how you feel been there love sux foreal

 

[chicano89]

nah not really...

 

[mexigurl15]

im goin to that same shitt fo real...

 

[mexigurl15]

damn i kno how it feels it hurts when u see him wit hes gurl and u kno u dyin to be with him...

 

[3sa_Angel]

damn i can relate to this but my love called me to say happy valentines day im happy cuz of dat.....he sounds changed.............but who knows.........i still cant trust him completely................but i likes you poem i can relate..........and im sorry.......girl if es how you feel still.............

 

[southsiide_mami]

damn ...i feel ya pain...im goin tru da same shit!

 

[MZ_SHYON3]

thanx for the love gente shit im tryin 2 move on but cant do much u know... but its all good ima have 2 for get bout this vato even though it hurts and shit...

 

[Lil Shorty]

im Sorry i been throu that its sad

 

[MZ_SHYON3]

its all good thanx for the love though

 

[VLKING]

That Is Good Pome And Sometime What Has To End Is For The Better

 

[MZ_SHYON3]

tru tru

 

[chicano]

Really liked the poem, and I been through what you wrote, nice writing. I like the way you changed it from english to spanish. Keep it firme.