Th3 lif3 of a Cholo

[La_Morena]

A hom3 boy once cri3d th3r3 was a r3ason why...
Su carnal has di3d
A fuckin chap shot his broth3r 5 tim3s

Los dos carnal3s claim3d to b3 from th3 south sid3
Th3y both had tatoo3d in th3ir ch3sts SUR 13
a sid3 it said asta la MU3RT3.

Th3r3 h3 sat on th3 ground w3r3
his broth3rs d3ad body was.

H3 had 5 shots on him-on3 shot w3nt right through
his h3art w3r3 h3 had tatoo3d th3 nam3 of th3 girl h3
lov3d.

Four shots w3nt right through his ch3st straight at th3 num3ro tr3c3.

Th3 homeboy told him s3lf that h3 was gonna find th3 fuckin chap
who took his broth3rs lif3, and shoot him tr3c3 v3c3s to l3t th3m
know who 3v3r g3ts in a sur3nos way g3ts to di3 th3 n3xt day...

 

[La_Morena]

it's lame but oh well...

i know it's lamo but i had nothing to do i was bored so i thought of writing a poema about some cholo so yeah it's lame ni modo...

wut u guys think!!!???

 

[3sa_Angel]

na girl..........i likes it...........my type of poem anyways i write some that b more hard core den dat.................but i likes es coo...........

 

[\|/MANIAKK\|/]

Das Some Tru Shyt Pay Backkz A Muddafukka
But All Da Shyt Happends Das Y I Don Cry Wen Brothers R.i.p It Come Wit Da Terotory Vatos Die Jus Likke Numbers R Earase
But Fukk It Norcaca Killa N Kking Kkilla All Day Every Day

 

[chicano]

i know it's lamo but i had nothing to do i was bored so i thought of writing a poema about some cholo so yeah it's lame ni modo...

wut u guys think!!!???

Yeah, you're right. It was kind of bad, but you seem like you got some talent though, try writing something besides "sur gangs, pride of a sureno" and you might got something going on in poetry.

 

[p33w33lover_13]

Dats What I Am Talking Bout!?!?!?!?! Ti Is All Bout Da Sur 13

 

[lokita_corona14]

wow thats sad

 

[baller323]

RAZA KILLING RAZA IS WHAT THE ENEMIES LOVE ONE WHO KILLS HIS OWN KIND IS A MALINCHE A TRAIDOR TO HIS OWN RAZA.UNITED WE STAND NORTE AND SUR THE WAR IS OVER BETWEEN US WE ARE ONE NOW WE STAND UNITED STRONGER .TO FIGHT THE TRUE ENEMY OUR OPPRESSORS

 

[ESE GIL...<---]

RAZA KILLING RAZA IS WHAT THE ENEMIES LOVE ONE WHO KILLS HIS OWN KIND IS A MALINCHE A TRAIDOR TO HIS OWN RAZA.UNITED WE STAND NORTE AND SUR THE WAR IS OVER BETWEEN US WE ARE ONE NOW WE STAND UNITED STRONGER .TO FIGHT THE TRUE ENEMY OUR OPPRESSORS

^^I Agree

The Poem Was Aoright Tho!

 

[maria hernandez]

thats kool

 

[shygrul]

dam 2 much hynaz writing da same shit y copy 4rom some1 da wrot it aint da some fukd up shit wana sound cool wit da same poem do ur own shit ke no