to all my homeboys

[carlitos08]

To all the homeboys on the street,
I'm still torcido and can't be beat.
I know I'm taking it just fine,
Because I haven't lost my mind.
I started to play their game,
While my mind was on a different lane.
I've been acting like I'm crazy and down,
But deep inside I know I'm acting like a clown.
I'll probably spend my life in one of these holes,
Maybe some day I'll get life without parole.
I've caught a lot of time for acting like a fool,
But now I'm starting to act real cool.
People tell me my life has just begun,
But to me my life and soul are aleady gone.
I know I should listen to what they say,
Because they're right, the vida loca doesn't pay.
But I'm just a vato loco who doesn't care,
Because this justice is unfair.
I can't stop because I'm into it to deep,
But it hurts to hear my jefita weep.
She tells me that God loves me and He cares,
But I can't find Him anywhere.
I can't believe in someone I can't see or feel,
I need someone who is for real.
So I guess I'll leave God alone,
And let him take care of the poor.
While I just kick back behind my locked door....

 

[montoyamilf]

I like your poem...it was good

 

[3S4S4D3Y3Z]

Dammn Nice Poem.. I Like It Alot

 

[atlanta_latina]

damn that was good....good job

 

[3s3_Weedster]

damn hommie deep..........good poem ese i feels ya on dat one..............i know how ya feel.............

 

[nava block]

dame this is a really nice poem

 

[a_cute_jasmin]

I liked yo poem...it was tight. Is this how you really feel?

 

[luv hurts]

dam homie i liked yo poem i no wat u go tru even if ima gurl in no wat dat life is like cuz damim barley gna b 16 n homie ive ben tru alot in ma short life bt dam keep it up dat wuz a bad ass poem i cryd a lil wen i red it

 

[htownzdulcenina]

nice poem boy

 

[xXM3RC3D3SXx]

Damn dis poem was pretty good, i liked it a lot keep up with tha good work

 

[p33w33lover_13]

dats hwat man keep it ^ aight!!! ur mexican friend nise aka: peewee lover

 

[chocolatebunny]

WoW the poem was like WoW good one!

 

[**MiSS 5o9**]

Wow Thats A Super Good Poem!!! I Like It!!!!!

 

[**mOrEnA nEnA**]

...Ur poen was tight...

 

[carlitos08]

dam i still like this poem

 

[La peke]

Good job, I liked your poem it was tight!