what do yas think

[angelita_bonita]

I Asked God

I asked God for a flower, he gave me a bouquet
I asked God for a minute, he gave me a day
I asked God for true love, he gave me that too
I asked for an angel and he gave me you.
:]:]:]:]:]:]:]

 

[3sa_Angel]

awww......thas so cute.........es a nice poem......

 

[angelita_bonita]

thanx its kinda short but i felt like i had to get it down so i wrote it here

 

[angelita_bonita]

its bout my boi jeremy

 

[~Baby Cake~]

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW...DAT IS LIKE SO CUTE I loved it...even though it was short haha.

 

[angelita_bonita]

hey i was just talking to you told ya LOL
you rply to everyones pieces
but i havnt seen any youv ritten yet

 

[~Baby Cake~]

ooh lol I use to write, but part of me just stop wanting to write...I still Have my first poem I wrote. I'll post it up later when I find it hahaha.

 

[angelita_bonita]

i see well im not that good so when you give me feed back be totally honest
saw u being friendly before to that english guy

oh by the way im from Australia but my papi's frm el salvador so yeah im latina

Be seein ya 'round

 

[~Baby Cake~]

I think your good...I jus think dat it should of been longer, but it's all good. That's cool dat you from Australia and dat your dad from el Salvador...so is it nice in Australia?

 

[angelita_bonita]

yeah i wouldnt move for a million $
love it here i guess you'd neva want to leave your home thanx for the feed back

oh and jeremy's here id neva leave him
i swear im obsessed with him; comes with being in love

hope to see you writing soon

 

[~Baby Cake~]

ooh ok den lol So you in love...dat's cute and yeah I'll post up some later. Dats cool dat Austraila is nice...I should go visit down there lol maybe when I have money lol

 

[xXM3RC3D3SXx]

This is short but i liked it

 

[**MiSS 5o9**]

ive heard it before but ya i like it too!

 

[angelita_bonita]

you cant have heard it before but it has the base rythum of some poems but entirely different words

 

[**MiSS 5o9**]

well the one i heard goes like this.........

i asked God for a flower he gave me a bouquet
i asked God for a minute he gave me a day
i asked God for true love he gave me that too
i asked for an angel n he gave me YOU.

its kinda da same exept for that one line