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Your Love

Your Love
Baby you don't know what you do to me between me and
you i feel a chemistry i won't let no one
come and take your place because the love you give, it
can't be replaced, see no one else can love me like you
do that's why i want to spend my whole life with you,
do u understand?
your love is one in a million.
 
This isn't bad.. But it has some rough edges.. Still, stick at it.. Just work on it, and this could be a strong peice. Either way, you got ya heart and feelings into it, so.. good stuff.. Peace.
 
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