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..They Fuckin' You...

dr0ne

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VERSE ONE:
You think the government want you and ME-TO-SUCCEED//1
They DECEIVE-AND-MISLEAD, constantly take, the GREEDIEST-THEIVES//2
Put anything in our way to stop what WE-CAN-ACHIEVE//3
They get us to kill ourselves, so INGENIOUSLY//4
But those the cards that life has dealt, and so we READ-'EM-AND-WEEP//5
And we fallin' for their bluff, and we PROCEED-TO-BE-WEAK//6
They say we got our little FREEDOM-OF-SPEECH//7
But say George Bush should BE-IMPEACHED.. and watch ya FREEDOM-GET-BREACHED//8
Demons at work, don't try to blur the lines of FACT-AND-FICTION//9
Cause the fact is that they keep the blacks and Latins PACKIN'-PRISONS//10
And the select few they lettin' lose, that ain't TRAPPED-IN-THE-SYSTEM//11
They've CAPTURED-'EM-DIFFERENT, so IRAQ'S-WHERE-THEY-SHIP-'EM//12
Sendin' young men with GUNS-IN-PALMS, droppin' TONS-OF-BOMBS//13
Seperatin' SONS-AND-MOMS, sayin' God'll keep the YOUNGIN'S-STRONG//14
Sayin' it's all worth it now, just cause they finally HUNG-SADDAM//15
The government or parents? Where you think those words are COMIN'-FROM?//16

There you have it.. Would appreciate some feedback...
 
Thanks for the comments.. I just post what I feel.. I've been at it for a while.. This is for a complete song.. felt like sharing a peice.
 
VERSE ONE:
You think the government want you and ME-TO-SUCCEED//1
They DECEIVE-AND-MISLEAD, constantly take, the GREEDIEST-THEIVES//2
Put anything in our way to stop what WE-CAN-ACHIEVE//3
They get us to kill ourselves, so INGENIOUSLY//4
But those the cards that life has dealt, and so we READ-'EM-AND-WEEP//5
And we fallin' for their bluff, and we PROCEED-TO-BE-WEAK//6
They say we got our little FREEDOM-OF-SPEECH//7
But say George Bush should BE-IMPEACHED.. and watch ya FREEDOM-GET-BREACHED//8
Demons at work, don't try to blur the lines of FACT-AND-FICTION//9
Cause the fact is that they keep the blacks and Latins PACKIN'-PRISONS//10
And the select few they lettin' lose, that ain't TRAPPED-IN-THE-SYSTEM//11
They've CAPTURED-'EM-DIFFERENT, so IRAQ'S-WHERE-THEY-SHIP-'EM//12
Sendin' young men with GUNS-IN-PALMS, droppin' TONS-OF-BOMBS//13
Seperatin' SONS-AND-MOMS, sayin' God'll keep the YOUNGIN'S-STRONG//14
Sayin' it's all worth it now, just cause they finally HUNG-SADDAM//15
The government or parents? Where you think those words are COMIN'-FROM?//16

There you have it.. Would appreciate some feedback...




fuck potential...ur shit is sick ...point blank nigguh.
 
Damn.. On the real, this means a lot to me.. I post a lot fo my shit on websites with a lot of whites and blacks.. not too many Hispanics.. With Lil' Rob, SPM, Knightowl, Mr. Capone-E (not my style of writing) being like the barrier for Chicanos in rap, it's hard to think sometimes my shit wouldn't be accepted, since it's so different.. So, for my brown people to like my work, truly means a lot to me. Love it.. Peace.
 
Damn.. On the real, this means a lot to me.. I post a lot fo my shit on websites with a lot of whites and blacks.. not too many Hispanics.. With Lil' Rob, SPM, Knightowl, Mr. Capone-E (not my style of writing) being like the barrier for Chicanos in rap, it's hard to think sometimes my shit wouldn't be accepted, since it's so different.. So, for my brown people to like my work, truly means a lot to me. Love it.. Peace.
actually SPM has ALOT of song slike that.....
 
The lyrics are what you say.. the wording is how you say it.. MOST southern artists don't use the quick delivery and the multis that I use. Most artists in the mainstreat really don't use the quick flow or the multis I do.. I don't want to say what other people do is simpler.. but for lack of a better term, it is. My shit is GENERALLY speaking, much more complex then southern music.. Not tryna sound cocky, and I know some people just wanna party. I respect that, I'm just saying that I REALLY think out every line (not saying others don't) and I make my shit real complex, yet understandable. I got a lot of verses like this.. just about different topics.
 
The lyrics are what you say.. the wording is how you say it.. MOST southern artists don't use the quick delivery and the multis that I use. Most artists in the mainstreat really don't use the quick flow or the multis I do.. I don't want to say what other people do is simpler.. but for lack of a better term, it is. My shit is GENERALLY speaking, much more complex then southern music.. Not tryna sound cocky, and I know some people just wanna party. I respect that, I'm just saying that I REALLY think out every line (not saying others don't) and I make my shit real complex, yet understandable. I got a lot of verses like this.. just about different topics.

simon I can see we're ur coming 4rm but sit down and listen 2 SPm especially his new album and multis r in almost every line....Z-Ro and Trae, are along w/ bone Thugs and Twista on the fast rapping and not 2 mention they have some of teh deepest shit, me 4 1 aint 1 that listen 2 most of that dam mainstream bullshit...I dont wanna hear about how much dam money u got in the dam bank or how "freaketona" or girl gets or whatever 2 quote the game on it " id ont wanna hear about ur rims and much "ice" u got on ur chain, I wanna know the name of the block u we're raised on, I wanna know ur grandmas name, I wanna know how ur dad and ur mom got along, I wanna know how you felt about the whole situation" now not say i dont listen 2 it so of it is pretty hot LIke Pimp C and Bun B, or some of Paul Wall and Chingo, but mainly I like hearing shit I can relate shit that can bring me up and give me strenght when Im down and out, you see music is my life, Its like my drug, when i jam my music especially when I'm depressed, angry, sad, ect its like I enter a whole new realm...reason y dont like hearing much of this mainstream crap...
 
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