11/3/06

[Mr Unique]

2:34 AM
It's two in the morning and I lie wide awake
Curled up in bed, just thinking nonsense, cause my weariness I want God to take
But my heart still does not trust
I get up for a drink
Then go back to bed, yet my eyes still blink
I'm sleepy
But I refuse to sleep, uncounsously cause I'm hurting deeply
Confused, trying to figuere out a problem
I yelled at my jefa, we argued earlier and now her ex-boss I gots to talk to em'
But then again I'm not so sure
Cause I'd be letting him know she got mad, and about that I'm just not so sure
But dam, I'll sleep on it
Maybe even dream, cause right now my mind has a big heap on it
Shit I'm yawning
And I'm about to get up and turn the lights off as soon as I stop writing...

8:50 AM
I've made up my mind I'ma talk to the dude
Cause he got Momma in an angered mood
And thst shit just don't pass
Even though right now I'm in class
Not focusing on my work
Talking to the teacher about History book's leading blindness and all the shit they murk
Now I'm back to my stressed out mind
Ballpoint pen spilling my feelings, writing these rhymes

 

[Mr Unique]

what about this 1...

 

[[Lil Boo]]

Wow....dats ..wow...uhm....its Good!!! So Emotional..lol

 

[Mr Unique]

lo...thank u thank u LOL simon...

 

[[Lil Boo]]

Lol..no Problem...haha I'm Watchin Some Funny Ass Fuck Fights!! Haha

 

[Mr Unique]

orale orale

 

[**MiSS 5o9**]

This is better! ur good at this

 

[Mr Unique]

orale thanx thanx 1 love

 

[El Mas Chingon]

orale thanx thanx 1 love

nice

 

[Mr Unique]

simon simon ^^ thanx bro 1 love

 

[HomeyG]

thats what im talkin about

 

[Mr Unique]

simon thanx vato 1 love

 

[DoeMemba]

2:34 AM
It's two in the morning and I lie wide awake
Curled up in bed, just thinking nonsense, cause my weariness I want God to take
But my heart still does not trust
I get up for a drink
Then go back to bed, yet my eyes still blink
I'm sleepy
But I refuse to sleep, uncounsously cause I'm hurting deeply
Confused, trying to figuere out a problem
I yelled at my jefa, we argued earlier and now her ex-boss I gots to talk to em'
But then again I'm not so sure
Cause I'd be letting him know she got mad, and about that I'm just not so sure
But dam, I'll sleep on it
Maybe even dream, cause right now my mind has a big heap on it
Shit I'm yawning
And I'm about to get up and turn the lights off as soon as I stop writing...

8:50 AM
I've made up my mind I'ma talk to the dude
Cause he got Momma in an angered mood
And thst shit just don't pass
Even though right now I'm in class
Not focusing on my work
Talking to the teacher about History book's leading blindness and all the shit they murk
Now I'm back to my stressed out mind
Ballpoint pen spilling my feelings, writing these rhymes

ok..there is a few lines,i really liked...u packed that up with so much emotion homie, which actually made ur piece worth reading. u grab the listeners/readers attention with what you write is what i'm saying. i also liked the whole concept of 'i woke up in the morning bla bla and goin to school. li just think you've coulda make it better man, like you start of with a story but you can give us some details on what happened thru ur day, why did u fight ur mom..u can say u got shitted by a dog on the way to school...lol anythin me entiendes...just make it interesting....try doin a story beto..you'll be surprise what you can do.


ne ways beto keep up the work man.

 

[[Lil Boo]]

ok..there is a few lines,i really liked...u packed that up with so much emotion homie, which actually made ur piece worth reading. u grab the listeners/readers attention with what you write is what i'm saying. i also liked the whole concept of 'i woke up in the morning bla bla and goin to school. li just think you've coulda make it better man, like you start of with a story but you can give us some details on what happened thru ur day, why did u fight ur mom..u can say u got shitted by a dog on the way to school...lol anythin me entiendes...just make it interesting....try doin a story beto..you'll be surprise what you can do.


ne ways beto keep up the work man.

u got shitted by a dog? wtf!! lol

 

[LOCA*BATLADii3]

^^^no Stupid....he Just Showin A Example!!

 

[Mr Unique]

ok..there is a few lines,i really liked...u packed that up with so much emotion homie, which actually made ur piece worth reading. u grab the listeners/readers attention with what you write is what i'm saying. i also liked the whole concept of 'i woke up in the morning bla bla and goin to school. li just think you've coulda make it better man, like you start of with a story but you can give us some details on what happened thru ur day, why did u fight ur mom..u can say u got shitted by a dog on the way to school...lol anythin me entiendes...just make it interesting....try doin a story beto..you'll be surprise what you can do.


ne ways beto keep up the work man.

orale simon simon..orale orale...lol orale ..simon i think i know what u mean...orale what u mean like a "rhyme" story?? simon simon u know it B ey by the way q onda con los trees?? LOL

 

[HomeyG]

simon thanx vato 1 love

its alright vato

 

[Mr Unique]

simon...