A Gangsta In Pain

[truthBtold]

NOW DAT U GONE MA HEART FOR U BLEEDS
I BEG TO GOD TO BRING U BAK ON MY KNEES
I PRAY FOR HIM TO BRING YOU TO MA HEART
I DONT KNOW WHY U DID DIZ IF I LOVED YOU SINCE DA VERY START
FOR U I SHED SO MANY TEARS
I LEFT SO MANY THINGS JUSS TO HAVE U NEAR
I DID EVERYTHEN U WANTED CUZ LOSING U WAZ MY FEAR
BUT NOW I SEE EVERYTHEN CLEAR

I WISH I KAN GO BAK ND CHANGE ALL DA THINGS I DID WRONG
WITOUT U BABE I KANT STAY STRONG
I FEEL LIK DYING CUZ DA LIL TIME I HAVENT BEEN WIT U SEEMS SO LONG
I REMEMBER WE PROMISED TO BE 2GETHER FOREVER
BUT U CHANGED YOUR MIND CUZ U HEARD I WAZ A PLAYER
I REMEMBER I SAID I WAZ GOING TO MAK U MA WIFE
ND PROMISED TO LOVE U 4 DA REST OF MY LIFE
WEN U SAID DA WORDS ITS OVER I FELT LIK SUMONE STABED ME WIT A KNIFE
I KANT BELIEVE A GANGSTA LIK ME FELL INTO DIZ LOVE GAME
4 U I LEFT MA HOOD DISSED MA HOOD ND SAID FUK TO WAT I USED TO KLAIM[/SIZE]
I JUSS FEEL LIK GRABIN A KINFE ND CUT MA WRISTS VEIN[/SIZE]
AFTER EVERYTHEN I LOVE YOU I SWEAR TO GOD I DONT SWEAR IN VAIN
EVEN DOE U DID ME WRONG LEFT WITOUT A REASON ND ALL DAT SHYT THANX FO SHOWIN ME LOVE BUT U LEFT DIZ GANGSTA IN PAIN!|![/QUOTE]

Roses are Red
Violets are Blue
This poem is pretty F*ck'n gay
and so are you.

your shit is C-O-R-N-Y "Mr. Gangsta" lol.

 

[Mr. T]

Yo I gotta agree with cracka boy, rhyming HEART and START, LIFE and KNIFE, WRONG and LONG... I've read better poems in a Dr. Suess book nigga.

 

[IZZY]

Chale Vato Thats Pretty F**ked Up Pero Tu Sabes Is Hard To Luv Some One That Dosent Luv That Dosent Feel The Same About U!!!

I Know How You Feel Not Long Ago I Felt Like That Its Going To Take Some Time But Hopefuly U Ger Thru It.

 

[xXM3RC3D3SXx]

omg I LIKED THIS POEM A WHOLE LOT IT KINDA GOT TO ME..BUT I HOPE YOUR OK ND JUST KEEP YOUR HEAD UP

GOOD WORK, KEEP ON WRITING

 

[baby joker]

awww dat wuz soo sad n sweet!!!!! but never trust n e one but yo self

 

[Cris]

That poem is very nice..... But u know nobody is worth ur tears and the one who is won't make u cry. I don't know u but u could do so much better with a girl who will believe u over others if she really do love you.

 

[truthBtold]

 

[ur gangsta gurl]

hey yo i like ur style dat shit is deep
holla gangsta 4 life
ps: what you claim?

 

[acuario5764]

:] :] to have talent !!!!!! this is good !!!!!!!!!keep them coming!!!!!!!!!!!:] :]

 

[**MiSS 5o9**]

that was good,ur good at writing so keep doin it!!!

 

[HomeyG]

eh i didnt like it

 

[n3gra16]

that was the sadest thing. p3ro you know th3r3 ar3 littl3 guys that car3 lik3 you do about th3 p3rson your with. Don't b3 sad. you'll find som3 on3 who is not a play3r lik3 som3 girls ar3.

 

[lokita_corona14]

luv it

 

[*sUr13*pUpPeT*]

That Poem Was Bad Ass I Loved It Man I Feel Your Pain Man!! Geez I Liked It Alot Pero If You Need Someone To Talk To I Am Here!! Message Me Or Whatever Pero Its A Nice Poem!!!!!

 

[LIL TRAVIESA323]

DANG..UR STORY IS PRETTY MUCH
LIKE MINES..WOW..THAT SUCKS...
AND I KNO HOW U FEEL..DATS MESSED UP
..BUT U STILL LOVE HER U SADI..DATS
A TRUE MAN WITH A TRUE HEART..
HOPE SHE CAN LEARN TO REALIZE THAT AND TAKE U BACK AGAIN

 

[LaOd3ja]

Dam that was deep. It reminds me of my man back in cali i love him to death pero things didn't go right, i wished i can go back and be with him pero i kno that cant be. If only he knew what i felt inside for him. I understand you email me and we can talk you are deep though with your peom

 

[.:SHORTY:.]

ey mijo juss to let u know i feel ur pain...but im here as a homegur but juss dont let ur gurl put u down...

 

[Sweet&Tender]

Damn, Thats Deep, I Likes

 

[~*Angelica*~]

I loved da poem.....Dont worry thoough ders a gurl out der fo u n ull forget bout all da pain u feelin now keep...keep yo head up

 

[*MzRizo*]

I Like This Poem All Kinds