como es

[tickle me elmo]

* Como es*
The dirt ,like me....is brown
So many of our people have died on this ground.
EN la madrugada u can see the ghosts
Of our Indio homies happy but most....
Loco and angry to scare the gueros
I can hear them"kill those perros"
Simon,racists have been around for some time.
PRIDE...they can't do nothing about mine.
Im proud of my race,
citizenship I'll through it in their face.
we've been called ilegal for years, we created
the border river out of our sweat and tears.
Alot of land has been taken from our country
I wont stop till they stop me.
cali's governer is a terminator
bush has 2,3 years till we say"see u later"
Then comes another pendejo to screw us up
even worse the border is gonna be shut
I'm pretty sure the indios are gonna be pissed
there gonna be wondering "who did this?".....
El presidente,Simon get the gente
El cuete,your jefe,chente,vamos a ser
187
(uno ochenta y siete)[violent]

 

[tickle me elmo]

someone please read tis and tell me what u think please.

 

[a_cute_jasmin]

OMG.....it's good.....I liked it allot. Wow you did pretty good. It had me thinking and yea I feel what your saying. Other then that I hope to read more poems from you

 

[tickle me elmo]

thanks.

 

[a_cute_jasmin]

No problem...hehehe.

 

[IZZY]

I like it alot.
Is true about the boarder but they can't stop da RAZA coming to the US.

 

[tickle me elmo]

NO they cant que me la mame el honkies

 

[atlanta_latina]

that was good and da truth

 

[EsaSadGirl]

thats firme you know whats up

 

[*cHiiKaNaLoKa*]

da shit is good....keep it up!!!!

 

[Foxy_Lady]

someone please read tis and tell me what u think please.

Wuz up man? It dont feel to good que no te respondan right????? Well I'm back for you!!!!!!!!!!​

n/e ways.... Me gusto tu little poem.It wuz hot!!!!!​

 

[Foxy_Lady]

That wuz good Elmo, Keep it up!!!!!! And that shit is true!!!!!!!

 

[lamexicanita17]

dat's tite vato...el presidente is fuckin up everythin pero wut can we do?