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finished yesterdsay,....

Mr Unique

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A tear drops down my eye
As I struggle to face reality instead of saying goodbye
As I struggle to accept the fact that I?m stranded in hell?s terrain
See the sun shines in my face like a hot Texas plain
But feet are shackled and my hands are still cuffed
A prisoner of the padded cell
I?ve made for myself
Sick in the brain
My vessels don?t transfer the oxygen right like a nigga?s nose nerves ripped by cocaine
Huffin? cause I?m runnin from my fears
Evading my peers
My stomach?s got mutant butterflies pounding in it like an overgrown baby
They want their freedom but first I gots to achieve mine
Just like love they say you gots to love yourself before you love none other but I resign
To that statement cause there?s this dame I got my eyes fixed on like an infrared beam
And now that I?ve I truly can?t picture myself without her, I?d be incomplete
Like sauna room with out the steam
Like Blueberry with out the ice cream
Similar to Aaliyah on 1 in a million, your style so fly
Can?t deny
My heart ripping through muscles, bones, and skin
Every time that I talk to her, busting grin after grin
And occasionally nut after nut like a whiteish, clear squirrel
But my mind is wrecked, I?m stuck in one spot like Grandmaster Flash in his DJing prime
Like a heat damaged CD that just wont play, dirtied in permanent slime
A stray dog with no owner
I?ve said before and I?ll tell you again, I?m a fucking loner
Cause god himself is wishing he never gave beat to my heart
Never strapped me with an umbilical cord, but he did and that wasn?t smart
I shoulda? just wrapped it round? my neck before momma ever gave birth
Now I?m destined demon on this fucking Earth
 
damn kid why u always be hatin on urself.......the imagery was sick tho...and it had sum nice similies...in there. keep at it..1 love
 
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A tear drops down my eye
As I struggle to face reality instead of saying goodbye
As I struggle to accept the fact that I?m stranded in hell?s terrain
See the sun shines in my face like a hot Texas plain
But feet are shackled and my hands are still cuffed
A prisoner of the padded cell
I?ve made for myself
Sick in the brain
My vessels don?t transfer the oxygen right like a nigga?s nose nerves ripped by cocaine
Huffin? cause I?m runnin from my fears
Evading my peers
My stomach?s got mutant butterflies pounding in it like an overgrown baby
They want their freedom but first I gots to achieve mine
Just like love they say you gots to love yourself before you love none other but I resign
To that statement cause there?s this dame I got my eyes fixed on like an infrared beam
And now that I?ve I truly can?t picture myself without her, I?d be incomplete
Like sauna room with out the steam
Like Blueberry with out the ice cream
Similar to Aaliyah on 1 in a million, your style so fly
Can?t deny
My heart ripping through muscles, bones, and skin
Every time that I talk to her, busting grin after grin
And occasionally nut after nut like a whiteish, clear squirrel
But my mind is wrecked, I?m stuck in one spot like Grandmaster Flash in his DJing prime
Like a heat damaged CD that just wont play, dirtied in permanent slime
A stray dog with no owner
I?ve said before and I?ll tell you again, I?m a fucking loner
Cause god himself is wishing he never gave beat to my heart
Never strapped me with an umbilical cord, but he did and that wasn?t smart
I shoulda? just wrapped it round? my neck before momma ever gave birth
Now I?m destined demon on this fucking Earth

ayyyy dios mio...dis poem good pero why you calling ya self a loner? I think god put you here for a reason so don't be so hard on ya self mijo....other then dat like I said dis poem you wrote was superb
 
orale simon thanx homita...cause I am always have been....ahh shit ive always been like that...its what makes me entiendes....sometimes u gotta take a fall 2 know how 2 get back up the right way me entiendes...pero simon thanx 4 the love...1 love
 
OOOOOOOOOOOOOooooooooh alrighty den...I get's you a bit pero you don't sound like a loner..dat's why I asked why you where calling ya self dat, pero te entiendo mas o menos....orale take care and keep ya head up

Muahz
 
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