"Hopeless"

[J.Ruiz]

Falling into a blackened hole
Loosing all self-control
Wasted tears on dead memories
Short of breath on bloody knees
Watch the sun crumble down
Dying slow without a sound
Into pieces is how I break
Salvation now is much too late
I will not cry again
No more tears to keep drowning in
Far away from myself
I question now my mental health
Am I just lost in space?
My heart becomes an empty place
You and I are not the same
I am numb from all the pain
Tonight I'll dream more violently
Yet remain lying silently
Tomorrow will I see a change?
I'll pray today it's not the same....
I'm hopeless...

 

[z123]

Great poem

 

[n3na-n-p3lon]

bien firme mijo

 

[ale]

nice poem

 

[dimebags]

Very good poem, J!

 

[MissPrecious]

i really like this one! ur a really good writer!

 

[Snuggles_1]

great poem

 

[.:RiSSA:.]

i liked that..that was real deep