Incomplete, Short Poem

[Verónica]

*MY PHOBIA OF MY FUTURE IS A PAINFUL GROWTH LIKE CANCER.
*I'M AFRAID TO LOOK TOO FAR AHEAD NOW,
CUZ TIME INDEED, MIGHT JUST PASS EVEN FASTER.
*I LOVED THE WAY I WAS LIVIN' THEN,
HE MADE ME HAPPY AND COMPLETELY SATISFIED,
*BUT NOW ALL THATS CHANGED....SHIT, I'M ALREADY FEELING TERRIFIED...
*CAN I GO BACK AND CHANGE WHAT I SAID?
WILL ALL MY PERFECT IMAGES OF US HAVE TO BE FORGOTTEN AND FLY OUT MY HEAD...WILL I BE LEFT WITH NOTHING BUT MEMORIES...IF SO THEN I'LL FEEL COMPLETELY DEAD...

 

[Verónica]

Awww Shit!!!...i Didn't Mean To Submit It Yet Btu Whateverz

 

[chicano]

It's incomplete?

Sure doesn't look like it.

I liked it, it's coming out good. <3

 

[Verónica]

Yeah...coming Out SO SO Wonderful ...ALRIGHT HAPPY...LATERZ

THANKS

 

[MrCort3s]

Thats Some Good Shit, Wish I Knew How 2 Write Poems Sigh* Lol

 

[Verónica]

...lol...nah I Thought It Was Just Shit..i'm Still Tryin To Think Of How To Finish It...but Whateverz...lol...thanks

 

[Mr Unique]

*MY PHOBIA OF MY FUTURE IS A PAINFUL GROWTH LIKE CANCER.
*I'M AFRAID TO LOOK TOO FAR AHEAD NOW,
CUZ TIME INDEED, MIGHT JUST PASS EVEN FASTER.
*I LOVED THE WAY I WAS LIVIN' THEN,
HE MADE ME HAPPY AND COMPLETELY SATISFIED,
*BUT NOW ALL THATS CHANGED....SHIT, I'M ALREADY FEELING TERRIFIED...
*CAN I GO BACK AND CHANGE WHAT I SAID?
WILL ALL MY PERFECT IMAGES OF US HAVE TO BE FORGOTTEN AND FLY OUT MY HEAD...WILL I BE LEFT WITH NOTHING BUT MEMORIES...IF SO THEN I'LL FEEL COMPLETELY DEAD...

simon looks done 2 me....well uc ould add 2 it but it shure dont seem "incomplete" nicely put beaner i like how u compared ur phobia growing 2 the growth of cancer...but remember 1 thing...things happen 4 a reason we may not like them but its always 4 the best...and u never know what the future may hold...so b strong bean...and if its meant 2 be the Lord will yall both right back 2gheter...

 

[Verónica]

Yeah We All Good Now Beto...thanks Beans...you Know I Love You..yeah I Was Going To Add To It But I Guess I'm Done...i'll Probably Add To It Later In Life...lol...thanks For The Feedback....

 

[Mr Unique]

Yeah We All Good Now Beto...thanks Beans...you Know I Love You..yeah I Was Going To Add To It But I Guess I'm Done...i'll Probably Add To It Later In Life...lol...thanks For The Feedback....

yea thats good...im glad 4 yall....no prob beans...orale...well i fu do just let me know so i can read it...LOL...simon u know it always 1 love

 

[tickle me elmo]

Buen Poema Mija

 

[Verónica]

Gracias...and Welcome To Brown Pride Elmo...