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..It's Untouchable...

dr0ne

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This isn't one of my "deep peices".. I just like fuckin' around with lyricism every now and again.. Might turn this into a whole song.. might not.. We'll see.. Anyway, feedback would be nice..

VERSE ONE:
Since the DAY-OF-MY-BIRTH, man, I've been SLAYIN'-WITH-WORDS//1
AMAZIN'-A-HERB, kill everyone on ya street, I'm a JASON-WITH-VERBS//2
I use my lyrics as therapy, it starts when the SPITTIN'-BEGINS//3
'Cause I'm dangerous as grenades when I'm MISSIN'-MY-PEN/PIN//4
Ready to take the top, and face the HATRED-IT-BRINGS//5
REIGNIN'-SUPREME around the greats, rule the NATION-OF-KINGS//6
I'm SATAN-WITH-WINGS, greed and evil, I'm FACIN'-THESE-THINGS//7
But I'm a puppet to the devil and he PLAYIN'-WITH-STRINGS//8
I'm the evolution of the mortal, morphe from MAN-INTO-GOD//9
You got no chance, don't PLAN-AGAINST-ODDS, I DISMANTLE-FASAUDES//10
I'll SCRAMBLE-YA-SQUAD, damn, man, I'm a MAN-WITH-NO-FLAWS//11
Put my life on the line in battles, do it FAST-WITH-NO-PAUSE//12
'Cause ain't no GAMBLE-INVOLVED, not a BATTLES-I'VE-LOST//13
I bring frenzy like Anna Nicoles death and the SCANDLE-IT'S-CAUSED//14
I eat rappers alive so I spit with a CANNIBALS-JAW//15
And rip a track like a DJ scratchin' with ANIMAL-CLAWS//16
 
es nice i liked it i even got to rappin it to mi estilo cuz i gots into it.......i dont do dat to alot o songs either.................. it be good hey keep it up...less hear da second verse........:D :).........
 
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