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Just finished it...peep...dedication/poem

Mr Unique

Legendary Poster
I feel nearer to success now than ever
But as I feel the triumph I also feel deaths breath on my neck
And her cold skeleton hand on my shoulder
Telling me baby boy its time to go
But I find hope grip it and hold on to it as tight as I can fo? sho
I shines my beam of accomplishment on her and scare her away like sunlight to a vampire
My much needed strength I acquire
I grab faiths hand as she leads me on, but it?s in me to make the decision to step up to the plate and overcome
And blur the line between hell and joy cause tech said it right on the beat drum
Hell is not a place where you go I you?re not a Christian
It?s the failure of your life?s greatest ambition
So I get up on my hustle
Strain every muscle
Grab my folk?s hands and lead them to paradise
Not up above in the skies
No not yet, but I guide them to victory
And when I say kin, I don?t mean genetic DNA chains
I mean love and care, those dear and loved, with same kinfolk veins
Now hear my mothafuking roll call

Momma?
I love you regardless of the drama
I know I?ve hurt you
And destroyed you
Just know I?m a confused youth
In search of the truth
And trying to achieve the making of my booth
Gabrielito
Chingado homito
I know I cause pain
Pero one day we?ll have umbrellas to cover us from the rain
Jefe, I aint got much words for you
But my bad I ever struck you
Though I must say you aint worth my time so I won?t buck you
Ma? sisters
I know we don?t spend as much time as we?d like, but this family is like raging twisters
Mariel( my niece), we spent time on roofs
Learning from each others stepping hoofs
Bryan, you know I will always say the same
My writing would be lame
With out you and so would my soul, you helped me find a part of me I had never seen through cracked glass
Shyma, dam you just my brother darker than brass :p
You too have taught me a lot
Sincerely the preacher boy, take care of V-Dot
Lord knows you?re blessed
Vero, thanx for listening to my the problems on my chest
I trust with my deepest secrets, that I?ve yet to tell you :p
Erika, in my eyes it never really worked out but you?ve touched me in a way only you could have
And though you always hold a place in my heart
Hate sours it up like a bitter tart
Marta, que chingados voy a ahcer contigo?
You too have educated me too
All in your own way, and I hope that I can help you out that confusion stew
7Up (my homie sense birth) we we?re practically born in the same hospital
Same apartments
And same anger compartments
Though I don?t see as much as I?d like too
You still my nigga for life, and that?s true
Ana, dam Ive only known you for a while, but in that minute you made me grow wings
And feel like a king
Horns are still there though?:D?but on the real like I?ve told you, you one real special lady
You crawled deep inside my heart and made it speak
Found the key to the door that makes up the reality of Unique


Well those are the closest to me, I got love for everyone though
Even them niggas that went bitch and wish me below
And I know I forgot a few of my patnas?
But we still reapin
Keeping it real, and true, one hunded?..LOVE YALL

ONE MOTHAFUKING LOVE​
 
that was deep beto.....im touched by it.....i didnt know i inspired u that much...reals words aren't lame tho..wether ur typical or lyrical..or a story teller..as long as u keep it real..it will sound tight. 1 love homie.
 
that was deep beto.....im touched by it.....i didnt know i inspired u that much...reals words aren't lame tho..wether ur typical or lyrical..or a story teller..as long as u keep it real..it will sound tight. 1 love homie.

simon simon...orale...pero thats the thing...i wasnt keeping it real me netiendes...it skin do flike u gave a reality check me entiendes...ey we all need it 4rm time 2 time...lol...1 love B
 
hey sup mijos..........que me ivas a decir..........??? sorry i had to leave......my bad......but im back for 30 minutes so you better be on too......:p
 
damn ma lit'ol beaner baby.......loved every single fukin part of it beto......imma have to print this out man.....fosho....damn....this went along smoothe...not a dull moment.......it feels like the best one yet beto....

oh yeah we really gotta talk for realz now man...i got stuff to tell you and i'z be knowin that you got shit to tell me too hun...so yeah ummmmm, email me alirhgt??....alright....nah, i'll email you right now...i got sutin to show you...i love you beto...always stay this true and it'll make you fukin famous.......i trust you too......weird but true........lol....love you...take care.....oh yeah and shaima will always be taking care of me and i will always take care of him too.....yay!...lol...anyway, laterz...me love you very much!
 
hell na ...if it is from the heart...then its never lame...and ma dude unique can flow..he just needs equipment.....it is like going to iraq without an AK47..or machine gun.. he gettin there tho..BUT i cant send him to war yet :D
 
damn ma lit'ol beaner baby.......loved every single fukin part of it beto......imma have to print this out man.....fosho....damn....this went along smoothe...not a dull moment.......it feels like the best one yet beto....

oh yeah we really gotta talk for realz now man...i got stuff to tell you and i'z be knowin that you got shit to tell me too hun...so yeah ummmmm, email me alirhgt??....alright....nah, i'll email you right now...i got sutin to show you...i love you beto...always stay this true and it'll make you fukin famous.......i trust you too......weird but true........lol....love you...take care.....oh yeah and shaima will always be taking care of me and i will always take care of him too.....yay!...lol...anyway, laterz...me love you very much!
LOL....and hang it on the wall....go 4 it...:p...orale simon q si V

yes we do...but ur mom...arghh...she b trippin...lol....simon simon....simon ill try porq I got 2 go handing out applications and shit and yesterday I aint even have time 2 go 2 the lib and then me and my jefa got in a gacho ass fight...make me famous??...and how do u supposse u'll do that??....:p..jk V...orale simon u know i truts u 2...lol....simon...i know yall do...orale simon V lov eu 2 beans...1 love
 
hell na ...if it is from the heart...then its never lame...and ma dude unique can flow..he just needs equipment.....it is like going to iraq without an AK47..or machine gun.. he gettin there tho..BUT i cant send him to war yet :D

simon thats the thing...it wasnt 4rm the heart...i wasnt being real bout it...not being me if u know what i mean...LMAO...I'm dirty in trenches, my flow is so sick I be sending niggas to the warming up benches...:p....simon....I'ma get there 1 day though B...we all gon' get there...shit...I'll be damded if we dont...:D....
 
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