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Life after death

chicano

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Opening my eyes to see nothing but a blurry image,
Pain runs down my body at a high rate, feeling dizzy,
I try to move, but it's hopeless, not knowing what happened
Hearing voices inside me, but yet I can't seem to understand,
My body starts to go into a paralyses,
Breathing my lasts breaths, crying for a miracle,
Seeing a strage light, not wanting to go, but the curiousity fills my mind.
This is my time to perish, I scream in agony as I try to live .
I only wish I would have said goodbye.
Only a few seconds left till I am no more, lying in my death bed,
Wanting to talk but can't say a word,
I feel a bitter taste inside my mouth, tasting my blood...
I plead to the heavens, and the stars
Please, give me the strength to get through this,
I promise you, I shall not be foolish,
Forgive my actions lord, I am forever regretful,
One last chance,I beg for forgivness,
I go into shock, as I gasp for air,
My eyes are open, but I can only see darkness,
My memories, my soul, just erased, no more I knew who I was.
For what I am, is a wandering ghost,
missery awaited me...
No mercy was I given, I layed there motionless, crys echoed..
For now I know that I had truly departed,
No happy ending, I wasn't spared,
Not knowing what would happen next, I was truly scared,
I hear a voice above the sky, I turn and listen,
"You dissapointed me, you brought me shame",
"You should be grateful, you're not rotting in flames",
I had felt the wrath of a god as I trembled in fear.
It was a destiny I couldn't escape, the lord made it clear.

What you guys think? :D
 

Dazed

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real nice...i liked it a lot..

damn how many s/n's do you have??
 

chicano

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Thanks for the feedback, peeps.

Nah, I just asked the admin to change it. So far it's been Sad Boy, Toto, Mexican, and Chicano.

I'ma stick with chicano though.
 

Dazed

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oooh ook...


hmm chicano...i dont like that word...but thats all you...i aint hating..

:)
 
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