.:life:.

[sly girl]

It's crazy, it's life
it's my life
you go out you come home, youre jefita is all upset cause you kick it with newgente, but you can never tell a veterana whats going on.
it's life.
it's what i was raised around, bad people but thats all there is.
you say they're bad, but i think familia.
that's what i see around nothing bad just life.
a life that no one understands or think without making a frown,
oh well thats youre fault, you made it like that,
and now finish it!!
with all you fucked up mistakes, like i said
it's crazy, it's life
it's my life:.[violent]

 

[chicano]

Man.....that was one of the stupidest poems ever.

Doesn't even deserve to be called a poem. Go hang yourself.

 

[MrCort3s]

All right chequeale poema right here

Siempre queriendo vivir
siempre queriendo murir,
As I try 2 escape all the hate,
That this fucken life creates,
i open my eyes,
and begin realize,
that i can only be what becomes of me,
As I sit here and wonder,
I realize those eyes
that stare back at me,
are the eyes of mi gente
crying for me,
They see what ive become,
all that i've had 2 overcome,
But now they see
life as plainly as can be
that i can only be what becomes of me


And if u dont kike it fuck U ha ha
p.s. dont copy this shit motherfucks this is MINE

 

[[Lil Boo]]

All right chequeale poema right here

Siempre queriendo vivir
siempre queriendo murir,
As I try 2 escape all the hate,
That this fucken life creates,
i open my eyes,
and begin realize,
that i can only be what becomes of me,
As I sit here and wonder,
I realize those eyes
that stare back at me,
are the eyes of mi gente
crying for me,
They see what ive become,
all that i've had 2 overcome,
But now they see
life as plainly as can be
that i can only be what becomes of me


And if u dont kike it fuck U ha ha
p.s. dont copy this shit motherfucks this is MINE

i WANNA FUCKiN THROW UP NOW! DAMN FOO LOOK WHAT YOUR POEM MADE ME DO!!!

HAHA...NAW i'M jUST MESSiN WiT YOU! iT HAS KOO....AY VAS AY VAS! LOL

 

[DoeMemba]

lol let me teach u how to rhyme gurl....in a few months ppl gon be like
'damnn UR ILL'

word up

 

[sly girl]

Man.....that was one of the stupidest poems ever.

Doesn't even deserve to be called a poem. Go hang yourself.

kick back ese if you don't know what the hell it means to me obviously you have no fucking sense on your surroundings and no not everyone around you fucks you over well maybe you cause only pendejos que se dejan get treated like someones bitch!!!!fucku

 

[chicano]

kick back ese if you don't know what the hell it means to me obviously you have no fucking sense on your surroundings and no not everyone around you fucks you over well maybe you cause only pendejos que se dejan get treated like someones bitch!!!!fucku

Sorry for being a bit extreme, but like I said before. The "poem" ..was awful.. I like to tell people straight up if I like what I read, and if you can't handle honesty then you shouldn't be posting up lame little poems like that.

I'm not trying to be mean to you in any way I just think the poem was horrible for someone to even think of posting something like this. You need to work on poetry, and I mean literally work on it because your talents for this are dim. You have no talent, period.

Don't be posting up poems if you don't like opinions and critisizm from other fellow members. Good day.

 

[sly girl]

Sorry for being a bit extreme, but like I said before. The "poem" ..was awful.. I like to tell people straight up if I like what I read, and if you can't handle honesty then you shouldn't be posting up lame little poems like that.

I'm not trying to be mean to you in any way I just think the poem was horrible for someone to even think of posting something like this. You need to work on poetry, and I mean literally work on it because your talents for this are dim. You have no talent, period.

Don't be posting up poems if you don't like opinions and critisizm from other fellow members. Good day.

its not that im trippin' over you talking shit trust me i could handle that shit but you don't what its about who its about or how it started so keep you comments to yourself if youre just gonna talk out of your ass keep your pants up......

 

[DoeMemba]

LOL sorry..that shit was horrible tho....u gotta up on ur skils.....u can start off with the rhyming.

 

[chicano]

its not that im trippin' over you talking shit trust me i could handle that shit but you don't what its about who its about or how it started so keep you comments to yourself if youre just gonna talk out of your ass keep your pants up......

Sorry, but I'm not going to keep my comments to myself. Did you forget you're on a public forum, and whatever you post on here..others can see?

People may give you good comments, and you don't mind them, but if they give you a bad comment..like I did. You get mad, lol...don't get so worked up. People are entitled to give opinions out. Get over it, damn[

 

[chicano]

LOL sorry..that shit was horrible tho....u gotta up on ur skils.....u can start off with the rhyming.

Lmao, not all poetry has to rhyme, but it does make it better.

Damn, gotta love good poetry though. =]