*~*MaKiNg a HyNa FaLL iN LoVe WiTh a cHoLo*~*

[lady_joker]

*~*ThIs Is Mi PrImErA StOrY Y iS TrUe HoPe YaLl LiKe It*~*


**VaToz**

Pablo a.k.a Pelon17;5'7' pelon,flako;guero,sureno, cholo,player, had a tat of sur 13 on hiz right harm, down for hiz shyt, the sekond leader of the southside choloz, hiz tio kasper is the leader of the southside choloz gang

Hector a.k.a Kasper 24, 5'8, light skinned, flako, leader of the southside choloz, sweet to the hynaz, pelonz tio, had hell of tatz

Luis a.k.a silent 16: 5'7, pelon, kinda guero, sureno, had a tat of sur 13 in hiz back, best homie of pelon

**Hynaz**

Ashley a.k.a babydoll 15, 5'3,skinny, pretty,long light brown hair , guera,

Angela a.k.a chubby 17,5'3,fat,mean az fuck,black hair, babydollz prima

Jennifer a.k.a Loka 16, 5'2, flaka,guera, hell fine, brown hair, babydollz and chubbyz homita

Pelon y silent are in pelonz canton chilling when Pelonz cell ringz

pelon: hello

voice: is pablo there

pelon: thiz him whoz thiz

babygurl: your baby

pelon: sup mija

chubby y loka laughing the background /images/graemlins/laugh.gif

pelon: whoz over there

babydoll: chubby and my homegurl loka

pelon: let me talk to her

babydoll what for what

pelon i just wanna talk to her

babydoll here /images/graemlins/mad.gif

loka: who iz it

babydoll someone wantz to talk to you here

babydoll all celosa gives the phone to loka

loka: hello

pelon: sup mija

loka: sup

pelon: whatz ur name mija

loka: Jennifer a.k.a loka el tu yo

pelon Pablo but my homeboyz kall me pelon

loka: orale

pelon so kuando loz podemos konocer

loka: you kan go to my kanton i live in 12** *. ****** st.

pelon oralez i be there tonight eh

loka: oralez bye

pelon and loka click

silent: so whatz up

pelon: ima go meet thiz hyna a su kanton wanna kome ese

silent: simonz kuando

pelon: tonight

To Be Continued?

 

[JAGUAR PAW]

*~*ThIs Is Mi PrImErA StOrY Y iS TrUe HoPe YaLl LiKe It*~*


**VaToz**

Pablo a.k.a Pelon17;5'7' pelon,flako;guero,sureno, cholo,player, had a tat of sur 13 on hiz right harm, down for hiz shyt, the sekond leader of the southside choloz, hiz tio kasper is the leader of the southside choloz gang

Hector a.k.a Kasper 24, 5'8, light skinned, flako, leader of the southside choloz, sweet to the hynaz, pelonz tio, had hell of tatz

Luis a.k.a silent 16: 5'7, pelon, kinda guero, sureno, had a tat of sur 13 in hiz back, best homie of pelon

**Hynaz**

Ashley a.k.a babydoll 15, 5'3,skinny, pretty,long light brown hair , guera,

Angela a.k.a chubby 17,5'3,fat,mean az fuck,black hair, babydollz prima

Jennifer a.k.a Loka 16, 5'2, flaka,guera, hell fine, brown hair, babydollz and chubbyz homita

Pelon y silent are in pelonz canton chilling when Pelonz cell ringz

pelon: hello

voice: is pablo there

pelon: thiz him whoz thiz

babygurl: your baby

pelon: sup mija

chubby y loka laughing the background /images/graemlins/laugh.gif

pelon: whoz over there

babydoll: chubby and my homegurl loka

pelon: let me talk to her

babydoll what for what

pelon i just wanna talk to her

babydoll here /images/graemlins/mad.gif

loka: who iz it

babydoll someone wantz to talk to you here

babydoll all celosa gives the phone to loka

loka: hello

pelon: sup mija

loka: sup

pelon: whatz ur name mija

loka: Jennifer a.k.a loka el tu yo

pelon Pablo but my homeboyz kall me pelon

loka: orale

pelon so kuando loz podemos konocer

loka: you kan go to my kanton i live in 12** *. ****** st.

pelon oralez i be there tonight eh

loka: oralez bye

pelon and loka click

silent: so whatz up

pelon: ima go meet thiz hyna a su kanton wanna kome ese

silent: simonz kuando

pelon: tonight

To Be Continued?

This is so sad all these kids should be in school.

 

[chicano]

I hate when people don't finish the story, it makes me get all into it.

I'm so intrigued now.

 

[**MiSS 5o9**]

AHHHHHHHHHHH.. MAKES ME MAD...!!!
FINISH IT ALREADY....!!!
L0L... I WANNA HEAR/READ DA REST...!!!

 

[Lizzy-Loc]

:] KEEP iT COMiN....i LiKE iT!!!

 

[La peke]

Damn, i wanna hear the rest.lol

 

[ESA BABY GURL]

I Wanna Here Moreeeee It Waz Kinda Off Getting Good Lol

 

[3sa_Angel]

This is so sad all these kids should be in school.

lol...........yeah they should pero instead they out in der houses thinkin they all rough and shiet bangin da 13....... tsk tsk tsk......lol................

 

[3sa_Angel]

*~*ThIs Is Mi PrImErA StOrY Y iS TrUe HoPe YaLl LiKe It*~*


**VaToz**

Pablo a.k.a Pelon17;5'7' pelon,flako;guero,sureno, cholo,player, had a tat of sur 13 on hiz right harm, down for hiz shyt, the sekond leader of the southside choloz, hiz tio kasper is the leader of the southside choloz gang

Hector a.k.a Kasper 24, 5'8, light skinned, flako, leader of the southside choloz, sweet to the hynaz, pelonz tio, had hell of tatz

Luis a.k.a silent 16: 5'7, pelon, kinda guero, sureno, had a tat of sur 13 in hiz back, best homie of pelon

**Hynaz**

Ashley a.k.a babydoll 15, 5'3,skinny, pretty,long light brown hair , guera,

Angela a.k.a chubby 17,5'3,fat,mean az fuck,black hair, babydollz prima

Jennifer a.k.a Loka 16, 5'2, flaka,guera, hell fine, brown hair, babydollz and chubbyz homita

Pelon y silent are in pelonz canton chilling when Pelonz cell ringz

pelon: hello

voice: is pablo there

pelon: thiz him whoz thiz

babygurl: your baby

pelon: sup mija

chubby y loka laughing the background /images/graemlins/laugh.gif

pelon: whoz over there

babydoll: chubby and my homegurl loka

pelon: let me talk to her

babydoll what for what

pelon i just wanna talk to her

babydoll here /images/graemlins/mad.gif

loka: who iz it

babydoll someone wantz to talk to you here

babydoll all celosa gives the phone to loka

loka: hello

pelon: sup mija

loka: sup

pelon: whatz ur name mija

loka: Jennifer a.k.a loka el tu yo

pelon Pablo but my homeboyz kall me pelon

loka: orale

pelon so kuando loz podemos konocer

loka: you kan go to my kanton i live in 12** *. ****** st.

pelon oralez i be there tonight eh

loka: oralez bye

pelon and loka click

silent: so whatz up

pelon: ima go meet thiz hyna a su kanton wanna kome ese

silent: simonz kuando

pelon: tonight

To Be Continued?

pero all in all

this story was aight............nothin to b so emocionado bout but it were aight..................but um one question whens the next part para ver como te va quedar la otra parte.....less see if es more intruigin then this part......((not tryin to hate just givin ya some feedback es your decession on how ya wanna take it...... ))