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chicano

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Everytime I look at you all I see is sadness.
I get so frustrated, that it simply drives me into madness.
I know I done bad things in the past,
It leaves me with such a little gasp....
of air, to see what you're going through...
Everything we just been through,
I hate the fact that you don't love or care for me as you used to...
Even when we started out and how I used to abuse you,
I'm sorry that I did you so much pain and suffering
But now I sit and wonder what the future holds for us,
Absolutely nothing...
Sadness and Sorrow...
There is nothing left to do but attempt something so crucial
I hope one day you forgive my actions for what I say is truthful.
I loved you then, and I love you now
That forever will be,
Now I must see the darkness that awaits me
So now it's time to say goodbye from me to you.
I'll be ending my life to make up everything that made you so blue
I get my gun and ask for forgivness, but you shed a tear and look away
That's all I needed to see and say,
I pull the trigger, my blood and brained corpse laid on the floor...
I was nothing to her anymore...
All because of my actions I decided to take my life,
I have nothing else to say but to see my light...

Eh, this is a poem I wrote like in ten minutes. I know it's pretty lame, but I'll be posting up some new ones soon.
 

Mr Unique

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ey that aint lame...its cool its cool...better than some ppl do...lol...naw pero neta thats alright...keep ur head up homito..i mean 4 10 minutes...its not that bad...1 love
 

La_Morena

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Thats Some BAD ASS POEM!!

La neta this ain't no :LAMe!! This is a bad ass poem homie!!
kepp it up.
 
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that poem aint lame homeboy!!! it is pretty good me gusta munchos i think it was bad ass actually i can relate to that poem in some ways well anywho keep it homeboy!! UNA AMOR!! UNA SANGRE!!!!
 

chicano

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Thank you so much for the love and respect, I really appreciate it.
 
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