My Poem, Let Me Know Wut U Think

[Kartoon[714]]

Day & Nite your constantly on my mind
No matter who i'm wit, I want you by my side
I get somewut like Mariah wit butterflies
whenever I get to contemplate your beautiful eyes
I can't overlook the way you make me feel whenever you're near
Any of the problems on my head suddenly dissapear
Trying to let you know that wuts on my mind
But sometimes bein alone and keeping to myself helps me unwind
I've had a lot of girls in my life, but your different than them all
Whenever you ever need me call, I'll be there for you through it all
So stop trying to find luv wit these mayate wanna-bz
And if you say no than fuck it, I ain't askin please

haha nah I was just fukin around wit that last line. let me know if I should add or take away anything yeah...I think it's kinda short and it still needs something but I don't know wut yet.

 

[Lunaticax3]

it be bonito to me.... yo no peinso que necessita otra cosa mas but to be longer....like you said....but to me it be good.....

 

[lonely_girl]

i thought it was good. it does not need nothin

 

[LATINA4LIFE]

ya it was good..me like it

 

[BabyEyEz_813]

Well damn I still like i..shit

 

[*Super Mayra*]

I Thought It Was Cute.....

 

[DoeMemba]

Soft..

 

[Kartoon[714]]

Soft..

I wus thinking the same shit but fuk it u know