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Mr Unique

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Jacking momma?s funds out her purse
Cause greed got me thinking money and riches gon? make it better but it only gets worse
More hurt, more rage, it?s like the day of my conceivement I was born with a curse
Satan came to my cradle and set his word, told me kill your own people
But now I?ve lifted the wraith y ahora escucha lo que te digo
Porque yo soy testigo
Del evil
Que pasa por nuestras calles
Cometiendo crooked tranzas and jales
So I speak to minds lyrically
Cause uneducated ghetto mentalities leave you fucked through the brain arthritically
Telling you there?s something out there better than twisted, malicious actions
Our own people being divided like negative arithmetic fractions
My noncivilized brains was set on a humanity, domestic extermination
For which I had no explanations
By own selfishness eating me alive
I myself, willingly took the dive
Stuck myself in the womb of a rampant cyclone
but now ive opened my eyes and stepped out of primitiveness
Working power moves with affectiveness
like ?GUttaville? I wish the devil would try me
Fight harshly
Against a stereotype driven society
Against the prosecutors of dylan klebold and eric hariss
With my words I exchange blows with those who try to take what we as humans cherish!
 

Tracalero

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Lawl all lokita does is chidos and 10s...I swear...

just looking at the overall written structure, it looks really cool, the

"For which I had no explanations
By own selfishness eating me alive
I myself, willingly took the dive"

looked outta place, a lil bulky...but you prolly werent trying to look pretty...

as for the lirica, yea, its straight...you try to get a lil canibus style in there, which is cool if you into that

" leave you fucked through the brain arthritically
Telling you there’s something out there better than twisted, malicious actions
Our own people being divided like negative arithmetic fractions"

It just made me laugh...really a unique way of approaching it tho (hence you apodo, no?).

Overall I like it...you have alot more freedom to roam and do things differently since you're not talking about the 3 mainstream topics (money, bitches and gangsta)
 

Mr Unique

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Lawl all lokita does is chidos and 10s...I swear...

just looking at the overall written structure, it looks really cool, the

"For which I had no explanations
By own selfishness eating me alive
I myself, willingly took the dive"

looked outta place, a lil bulky...but you prolly werent trying to look pretty...

as for the lirica, yea, its straight...you try to get a lil canibus style in there, which is cool if you into that

" leave you fucked through the brain arthritically
Telling you there?s something out there better than twisted, malicious actions
Our own people being divided like negative arithmetic fractions"

It just made me laugh...really a unique way of approaching it tho (hence you apodo, no?).

Overall I like it...you have alot more freedom to roam and do things differently since you're not talking about the 3 mainstream topics (money, bitches and gangsta)
LOL I know huh...:D :D

Yup like always ur right...dam u and Bryan...:D...simon i noticed but fuck it...That was the best way I could structur eit (until my perfectiveness mindstate kicks in) lol....

Orale...well i dont listen 2 him much just listened 2 a freestyle of his on utube...shit was pretty sick....

LOL...yes sir u know it :D

Orale...exactly....4 1 money...aint got none so I'll talk about being poor broke and ghetto....2....bitches...well I hardly see women as bitches or atleast the way some of these rappers project it....3...gangsta..nope not me..:D :D
 
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