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Mr Unique

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See I got no friends, cause niggas left me alone
When I was 3 yrs old
They judged me for the thoughts inside my dome
So now I?m returning the favor, bringing havoc to their life
My actions are the reason for the word strife
The reasoning behind unbearable pain
I?m the one who budges you, and doesn?t let you maintain
The red in your blood
The heart to your love
Turning you cold
But like I said before
I?m only returning the favor
Leaving a bitter ass flavor
In your mouth, turning small shit major
Cause I don?t function right bitch
My brain?s drowned in vinegar, so now my cells aint shit
Lazy eyes
Crazy I
Know
Yall hoes shoulda listened to the truth be told
Now my body sensors colder than an icy mold
Yall thought I was playing like yo momma jokes
But I wasn?t; now I?m bringing the drama like ganja smoke
I?m realer than triller
Serving you lead pellets, like a crack dealer
I?m an angry person
Tried not to cross the line, but yet I took the dive face in
These are words of a mental patient
Don?t make sense I know, my mind?s racin?
Like NASCAR chases
Turning corners without thinking, reckless phases
Forever lasting crazes
Psychopath student
Never couldn?t
Make it past the morning
Without sounding corny
I?m a raging silhouette
Full of detest, misery always be chillin with it
Lonely soul
Ugly ghoul
Stare deep into my eyes and see a beats
Tearing itself apart like cooking yeast
Foul breath
Slowly visualizing my bloody death
I wanna die slow
Not because I?m afraid, but because I wanna feel the blood flow
Taste the warm plasma
As the air leaves my lungs, like I?m dying from asthma


 

[Lil Boo]

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DiS P0EM BR0UGHT A CHiLL T0 ME..
FAh REAL`sZ...L0L
DAMN bET0 Y0U G0T SKiTTLE`sZ FAh REAL,
N0 j0KE..
i T0LD Y0U THiS MANY TiME`sZ BEF0RE i KN0W
PER0 i LiKED THE P0EM..N0T Y0UR bEST..
PER0 i LiKED iT ANYWAiiZ
 

Mr Unique

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DiS P0EM BR0UGHT A CHiLL T0 ME..
FAh REAL`sZ...L0L
DAMN bET0 Y0U G0T SKiTTLE`sZ FAh REAL,
N0 j0KE..
i T0LD Y0U THiS MANY TiME`sZ BEF0RE i KN0W
PER0 i LiKED THE P0EM..N0T Y0UR bEST..
PER0 i LiKED iT ANYWAiiZ

Simon I know what u mean.....simon than xE...yea I know but then again I did it like in 15 minutes...lol....with only a few revisions..so simon...pero simon thanx Erika...1 love
 

la_1_n_only

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wow............i like............you got skills......i got one......aver cuando lo ago post.
 

la_1_n_only

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orale simon athnx Jojo....i know i do lol...:p...aver dale...apurate!! :D
i got to look for it tho..............lo escribi i lo perdi..................i only member bits of it......no todo...............its lame but owel.....some other day......if i do.
 

Mr Unique

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i got to look for it tho..............lo escribi i lo perdi..................i only member bits of it......no todo...............its lame but owel.....some other day......if i do.

lol...orale orale...naw poetry can never b lame...some r just constructed better than others..:D :p
 

3sa_Angel

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i liked it babe i liked that last better................it appealed to me more....i dont know why it just did............??? i liked the poem though it were good.......:D
 

Mr Unique

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i liked it babe i liked that last better................it appealed to me more....i dont know why it just did............??? i liked the poem though it were good.......:D

Orale..pues nadamas le cambie the last 3 lines around a bit...not much change..pero simon...:D.....shiiit they always b good...:p
 
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