Para mi carnalito

[lucky]

Descanza en paz carnalito
Por ke aki tu ya no estas
Pero alla arriba eres un angelito
y en mi corazon para siempre estaras
Dicen ke el que muere ya no es nada
puro pedo tu sigues siendo mi carnal
Y el carnal de mi carnala
Y el hijo de mi ama
Pero sin ti Los Cruz son nada

R.I.P Lil carnalito nunca te olvidaremos siempre seguiras en nuestro corazon

 

[dre111]

i like u r stuff write me andrea G

 

[Dark Mexican]

i like dat lucky 1

 

[Verónica]

Thats Good Boy....very Nice

 

[DoeMemba]

that was beautiful man...i wrote some shit like this bout my grandpa that passed...but its all good...

 

[Mr Unique]

ey that was pretty good but why'd u stop there u should have made it longer pero no ay pedo its still good pues take care keep ur head up and God bless u 1 love

 

[[Lil Boo]]

JEESH BETO SOME PEOPLE AREN'T AS GiFTED AS YOU...LOL...WELL N-EWAiiz U DID GOOD LUCKY!! i LiKE iT...YUP YUP

 

[Shorty]

dem lucky dat is good.. boy i know how u feel i lost my carnalito tambien but i know i have inside of me all the fukin time til i die!!!

 

[Mr Unique]

JEESH BETO SOME PEOPLE AREN'T AS GiFTED AS YOU...LOL...WELL N-EWAiiz U DID GOOD LUCKY!! i LiKE iT...YUP YUP

lol well i was just trying to give the vato some advice shit lol jk

 

[[Lil Boo]]

lol well i was just trying to give the vato some advice shit lol jk

of course we all need 2 b askin u for advice cuz yo shit b tiight n dey gettin published n shit...u da real thing riite now huh?.....lol..jk...but hey is true


o n i'm still buyin yo shit when it come out!!!!

 

[Mr Unique]

lol orale u better lol

 

[Mr Unique]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gOZTtSwH0N4 listen to it its a bad ass song

 

[lizbeth]

hey that was nise i liked what you
wrote some people arent as talented to
write all that about your carnal like me
but it wasnt my brother who died it was my
uncle later on i'll see what i can do peace

 

[**MiSS 5o9**]

hey lucky that waz really good keep doin wat ur good @-k-

 

[getogirl]

I loved your poem!!

 

[SadeyeZ]

dang thats real good it touched my hart. R.I.P. to all the pplz that r angels in heaven watchin over us.

 

[acuario5764]

good pem i lik it

 

[LATINA4LIFE]

Descanza en paz carnalito
Por ke aki tu ya no estas
Pero alla arriba eres un angelito
y en mi corazon para siempre estaras
Dicen ke el que muere ya no es nada
puro pedo tu sigues siendo mi carnal
Y el carnal de mi carnala
Y el hijo de mi ama
Pero sin ti Los Cruz son nada

R.I.P Lil carnalito nunca te olvidaremos siempre seguiras en nuestro corazon

orale i like that...thats true stuff right there...i liked it alot