STAY ON MY MiiND

[lady_joker]

ii CLOS3 MY 3Y3S AND TH3R3 YOU AR3, YOU STAY ON MY MiiND LiiK3 A PAiiNFUL SCAR. 3V3RY MiiNUT3 OF TH3 DAY ii'M THiiNKiiNG OF YOU WiiSHiiNG YOU W3R3 DOiiN TH3 SAM3 THiiNG TOO...AND ALL THROUGHOUT TH3 DAY ii HOP3 TO S33 YOUR FAC3 SO ii CAN T3LL YOU THAT ii LOV3 YOU AND F33L YOUR WARM 3MBRAC3. AND 3V3RY NiiGHT B3FOR3 ii GO TO B3D iiMAG3S OF YOU K33P GOiiN THROUGH MY H3AD. ii PUT ALL OF OUR MOM3NTS TOG3TH3R ON R3WiiND, WiiSHiiNG ii COULD LiiV3 TH3M OV3R ON3 MOR3 TiiM3 AND ii PRAY TO GOD TO PL3AS3 MAK3 YOU MiiN3. DO3SN'T MATT3R WH3R3 ii AM, DO3SN'T MATT3R WH3R3 ii GO, ii'M ALWAYZ MiiSSiiN YOU AND ii DON'T CAR3 TO L3T iiT SHOW...YOU CAN SAY ii GOT iiT BAD BUT ii JUST CALL iiT LOV3, BUT iiT'S THAT R3AL KiiND BABY, TH3 KiiND S3NT FROM ABOV3...ii'M THiiNKiiNG OF YOU WH3N ii'M HAPPY, MAD OR BLU3. NO MATT3R WHAT THAT'S SOM3THiiNG ii'M ALWAYZ GONNA DO...SOM3TiiM3S ii LAY DOWN AND JUST B3GiiN TO DR3AM B3CUZ THOS3 AR3 TH3 ONLY MOM3NTS YOU COULD B3 MiiN3 iiT S33MS. YOU JUST DON'T KNOW HOW MUCH YOU M3AN...ii'D GiiV3 ANYTHiiNG TO HAV3 YOU RiiGHT H3R3 N3XT M3, ALWAYZ BY MY SiiD3, BUT THAT'S JUST A FANTASY...
LaDy_JoK3r

 

[chicano]

It was pretty good.

You need to organize your poetry and not write it in a paragraph. Also change the "3's" to "E's" and stop putting so many "i's".

It's confusing.

 

[3S4S4D3Y3Z]

LOVED IT.. ITS SO GUD!!

 

[La peke]

I liked it, keep it up.