THE hYNA Wit N0 fEEliNGZ

[1$kippy4]

.tHUh hYNA WiT N0 FEEliNGZ::
Therez thiz hyna with no feelingz
All that matterz iz her gang n her dealingz.
Alwayz $traped up with her dickiez n her flag
All thuh vatoz like her nd her firme lil swag.
"I dnt want love" thatz whut $he alwayz replyz
$o vatoz dnt even bother to go n $ay hi.
Rumblez evry day, blazin evry night
No worriez cuz erything seem right.
Femalez hate more evry day
But $hez ready to bla$t any hyna who getz in her way.
Bla$tin,bangin,cru$in,$tealing
Cuz $hez thuh hyna with no feeling.

JUZ A $IMPLE P0EM....

 

[-lADii_KillA-]

it simple poem
pero it firme
ifeel this alot
keep it up

 

[J.Ruiz]

Damn, like this piece....keep droppin 'em!

 

[1$kippy4]

it simple poem
pero it firme
ifeel this alot
keep it up

orale..thanx

 

[1$kippy4]

damn, like this piece....keep droppin 'em!

fo$ho

 

[BEAUTIFUL1]

i like it a lotttt

 

[1$kippy4]

i like it a lotttt

ximon..thnx

 

[Skriptz]

sorry but i ain't really feeling this one at all

typical/simple i'm a thug that don't take shit.. fight anyone,
all eyes on me... etc.. etc..

to me that kills most writings... keep practicing though
with better wording and a lighter topic.. bet you now it'll be a good piece

-peace

 

[MARiA:.]

PRETTy FiRME POEM PEROO U AlREADy KNOW WUSS UP

3XSOUTH:.SiDEX3

 

[.:bLU?_EY?Z:.]

.tHUh hYNA WiT N0 FEEliNGZ::
Therez thiz hyna with no feelingz
All that matterz iz her gang n her dealingz.
Alwayz $traped up with her dickiez n her flag
All thuh vatoz like her nd her firme lil swag.
"I dnt want love" thatz whut $he alwayz replyz
$o vatoz dnt even bother to go n $ay hi.
Rumblez evry day, blazin evry night
No worriez cuz erything seem right.
Femalez hate more evry day
But $hez ready to bla$t any hyna who getz in her way.
Bla$tin,bangin,cru$in,$tealing
Cuz $hez thuh hyna with no feeling.

JUZ A $IMPLE P0EM....

i agreei agreei agreei agreei agreei agreei agreei agreei agreei agree

i LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!​

 

[tuby tuby jr]

this kionda applies to me except i do gotz feelings for my boo n baby n i dnt bang under no dead rag i bang unda a black one nukka

 

[J.D. Luna]

that good mija

 

[calipimpn]

I liked it, just cuz its a poem about bein a thug and not givin a fuk it makes the poem bad? Guess its just one persons opinion.

 

[La Llorona]

its good....i like it. keep up the good work