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[Nenaa]

Every moment in my past was an unhappy one
Ready to go into a deep sleep n never wake up
Impossible dreams of happiness till the rising of the sun
Kept my hopes n spirits alive when everything else was bringing me down and making things tough
And to my surprise all it took were 2 little angels to guide me into this great path with

Zero regrets, zero loneliness and zero heartache.

Firme as fxck.

 

[esa.lil.one]

does it take you guys along time to think of something to write?

 

[Nenaa]

Not me.
But I just suck at it.
Plus like i said, I use metaphors and similes.
So people with deep critical skills get my shit.
On a high intellectual level.
That's how I am anyways.
Im not to poetic, just say how i want things to sound.
Ponder.

 

[esa.lil.one]

well at least you know how to right uh

 

[z123]

Thanx NENNA

does it take you guys along time to think of something to write?

N no it dont but i was just doin oda stuff lol

 

[Nenaa]

well at least you know how to right uh

Yeah, I write about deep shit, inwhat i would say a unique sort of way.
My major influences is my friend Eric, reading and This band "Why?"
there lyrics are intensely amazing.
My personal opinion.
I like to make people think.
For them to be like what? wtf does that even mean.
But when they really think about it there like oh.
&think it makes perfect sense.

 

[lady_riskie]

Pain and suffering, unfortunately inflict into my life
Everything I do, as much as I try is never right
Delirious this world has made me and I tear
On the other hand, good things occur like this here:
Besides me my family and optimism has always been
Everything dear to me orbits around my feelings within
A look to the sky, reminds me of the Lord who I pertain to
Really, no matter my clamor, He's relief to the pain I've been through

very firme

 

[J.Ruiz]

Pain and suffering, unfortunately inflict into my life
Everything I do, as much as I try is never right
Delirious this world has made me and I tear
On the other hand, good things occur like this here:
Besides me my family and optimism has always been
Everything dear to me orbits around my feelings within
A look to the sky, reminds me of the Lord who I pertain to
Really, no matter my clamor, He's relief to the pain I've been through

Good......Im looking forward to reading one of your pieces....hope u got one coming soon.

 

[Mijo323]

thank you hell yuh it came from my corazon

 

[LaRicanRarity]

My son is my life
I promise you, i'll never leave
January 1, 2010 you were born
Opened up my eye's and help my realize
3 is now my own family
2 is where i began
3 is not for long cuz now you'll have a baby sister that will soon too come along

I love that.Good job.

 

[Mijo323]

awww mijo that was deep

i like this ey its firme... it came from the heart

Beautiful

I love that.Good job.

thank you mija's dedicated to the mijo

 

[LaRicanRarity]

I never done this before but here it goes
Mourning day and night, night and day from the pain you caused me
Could of stopped me from being the woman that I am
Held down,beaten,robbed and raped I would always look to the sky and ask God from this heartache
Is there any escape
Love is all I ever wanted
Lusted after is all I ever got,you told me I was nothing,told me you could have your brothers kill me and yes you can
Luckily for me their gun jammed..
I almost breathed my last breath that evil day... heart racing,body bruised,still I asked God in His world could I stay
Kowards you are..it's easy to beat a woman try beating a man..
Erased my innocence yet still I stand
Darkness no longer has a it's grip on my life I survived it's pain and strife
A victim I was..a survivor I became
Thanks to my Savior I still have my life and for that I will forever praise His Holy name.

Hope ya like my first writing.I just finished the second part.

 

[J.Ruiz]

Its raw mama.....looking forwad to you finishing it....It seems like you have much to write about.

 

[LaRicanRarity]

Thanks yes I do.. other than the fact I have a long name to write ImChillLikeDat lol I have a lot to say but I never wrote poetry before so I write the first thing that comes to my mind and what happened in my life.

 

[LaRicanRarity]

thank you mija's dedicated to the mijo

No problem.

 

[LaRicanRarity]

Taking time to realize my won success
Hate in the hearts of others just brings out the best
Rolling up joints in the past n I was straight chillin
One day I hope to see my raza stop the killin
No one knows the pain in my heart
Every moment I feel like I wanna fade away in the dark
Denied in my youth of a better tomorrow
In the times of trouble I managed the sorrow
Me and my hefita just payin the rent
Many nights couldn?t eat cuz the funds were all spent
Only God can judge me holds some weight of the truth
Rockin myself to sleep when my ego was bruised
To many people just wasting away
All I ever want is to smile today
Look back on the past as I bow down n pray.

Once again another great poem.I love the ending sentence.

 

[J.Ruiz]

Cool......Glad u liked it.....straight from the top lol

 

[J.Ruiz]

I never done this before but here it goes
Mourning day and night, night and day from the pain you caused me
Could of stopped me from being the woman that I am
Held down,beaten,robbed and raped I would always look to the sky and ask God from this heartache
Is there any escape
Love is all I ever wanted
Lusted after is all I ever got,you told me I was nothing,told me you could have your brothers kill me and yes you can
Luckily for me their gun jammed..
I almost breathed my last breath that evil day... heart racing,body bruised,still I asked God in His world could I stay
Kowards you are..it's easy to beat a woman try beating a man..
Erased my innocence yet still I stand
Darkness no longer has a it's grip on my life I survived it's pain and strife
A victim I was..a survivor I became
Thanks to my Savior I still have my life and for that I will forever praise His Holy name.

Hope ya like my first writing.I just finished the second part.

Good....you finished strong n i liked that......damn.....can't wait till u write another one....just focus on every line and dig out those feeling......good job baby.

 

[LaRicanRarity]

Hahah you always make me laugh.I used my original username because when I first came on BP I was hurting and depressed from what "he" and his people did to me but over time I healed so.

 

[J.Ruiz]

Y i make u laugh?.....lol..........well maybe its best to leave those things in the past right?........but yeah......keep the Lord by ur side at all times....you will be ok.