After the breakup

[chicano]

You killed my dreams, and made a fool of me
I thought you'd be with me for eternity,
All my hopes went down the drain,
I truly thought I was going insane,
Every night I cry in pain
The heavens listened and it rained
I cry myself to sleep
I never thought it would be so deep
The love I had for you,
The things you told me just weren't true
People tell me I have a sad look in my eyes
If only someone would listen to my crys
I guess this was just meant to be
I'll keep on wondering when my heart will be free

 

[Mr Unique]

ey thats cool Tots....never knew u had any talent...LOL.....JK bro...naw pero neta its pretty cool...im feeling the part that says "the heavens listened and it rained"...thats deep keep it up and ur head 2 1 love

 

[Shorty]

dem! i luv this u are talent..lol..dnt know u pero it's niic3 ok. i f33l ya homie

 

[chicano]

Orales, thanks beto, thanks shorty.

 

[Verónica]

yup yup

ey thats cool Tots....never knew u had any talent...LOL.....JK bro...naw pero neta its pretty cool...im feeling the part that says "the heavens listened and it rained"...thats deep keep it up and ur head 2 1 love

what took you so long to show us ya skills man??....yeah that was my favorite part too....well one of my favorite parts...luv it!!!.....keep ya head up and take care boy.....

 

[DoeMemba]

Skills is not something you just pull out of ya ass...you gotta work at it, practice makes the best of it.

 

[erikabeat15]

man this poem just depressed me

 

[a_cute_jasmin]

Wow....this is one good poem.......I like it

 

[HomeyG]

im felling this

 

[3sa_Angel]

yes this be a pretty good poem.................(sigh)..............

 

[xXM3RC3D3SXx]

OOoo wee i liked this one it kinda got to me for a sec. yup yup well mucho respect

 

[La Brown Eyes]

oh I luv this pome thats wat happen to me wen ass hole broke my heart.

 

[La_Morena]

hey hey hey homie ur back thatz a cute poema homie keep it up

 

[acuario5764]

I Liked This Poem Hope That Didn't Happen To You If It Did Sorry
But Your Poem Was Deep Keep It Up

 

[areli]

this is a great poem... but sounded a little depressing.

 

[Isabella999]

You have great talent and obviously deep feelings.