Dear Love

[BANDED]

Dear love,
they said when they found you it was amazin
better then any blunt that they've been blazin
they say your a krazy feelin that feels so good
and as i listen i acted like i understood
but see the truth is i've felt your pain
and i know that i'm the only one to blame
but are my lovely days supposed to be just rain
have i had my many chances n just blown it away
is it me that i just can't get u ta stay
or is it me just always to scare n run away
am i ment to love the shyt i do instead of someone
cuze life gets really lonely when it's all said and done
am i just not ready and will you come to me one day
or have your given up on me and the lies i use to say
cuze honestly i pray that you'll come to me
cuze as i look around u've made everyone so happy
will i ever see you again or will it just be pretend
cuze of how i play'd you will you now play me
love i just don't understand am i ment to be alone
has my heart been kick out of it's own home
i know i don't deserve you for the shyt i've done
so i ment to just love smoke and roll another blunt?

 

[Joe310]

thats not a poem, that just a rant

 

[S!l3nTrZ]

I liked it.. Keep doing your thing.

 

[**MiSS 5o9**]

AaWWW.. DATS S0 G00D...!!!
* TEAR TEAR*.. VERY G00D...

 

[BANDED]

Lol..... Thankx

 

[ESA BABY GURL]

I Lk It Nices

 

[3sa_Angel]

yeah your poem were good.............serio.......

 

[laPr3cio5aDulce]

aey playboy i like ya poem alot.. i feel ur words .. keep ya words real and keep posten
**Besitos**
good luck​

 

[YAYA]

AWWW DATS WAS CUTE BT SAD..I REALLY LIKED IT
DID Y0U WRITE IT?..CUZ IF Y0U DID Y0U G0T TALENT BANDED

 

[ESA_GIGGLESX3]

LOL DAMMNNG
U GOT SHO SPIT SUM FIRME LINES HUH
U ALREADY KNOW I LIKE THAT POEM !!!

 

[*MzRizo*]

This Is Hella Good

 

[BANDED]

Thankx

 

[BANDED]

LOL DAMMNNG
U GOT SHO SPIT SUM FIRME LINES HUH
U ALREADY KNOW I LIKE THAT POEM !!!

GIGGLES U LIKE EVERY THINK THAT GOT TO DO WITH SMOKING LOL..........J/K [hurtu] ​

 

[Shorty]

iTS NiCE BABY i LiKE iT

 

[chicano]

Why would you want the use the word "blunt" in this?

Especially twice, wtf.

You killed the poem.

 

[Shorty]

CHiCANO DNT TRiP YA TE DiJE....

 

[chicano]

CHiCANO DNT TRiP YA TE DiJE....

Mija this has nothing to do with me and him or the personal issues I have with him.

I just didn't think it was good, was I suppose to say "it's good" when I wasn't feeling it?

I was just being honest, lol. He isn't the only one I give negative feedback to, trust me.

 

[Shorty]

Hahhaha 0.kl C00l Chavo

 

[DoeMemba]

it's a rap.....

not poetry....nicely done.

 

[Shorty]

hahah bryan