If

[Lil Poet]

Dedicated to someone special......

If i was "The Beast" you would be "Bell"
i need you more than words can tell.
If you were Princess Jasmin that woul'd make me Aladdin,
Take you on a magic carpet ride and stay up all night chattin'.
If i was prince charming you'd be my cinderella
we'd live happily ever after until were abuelo y abuela.
If you were Mulan i'd be that chinese vato that she loves
I'd show you que " WO AI NI YONG " With lots of kisses and hugz.
If i was Jack than you would be Rose,
Except this time i would have never froze.
If you were princess Fiona that would make me Shrek
we'd be enamorados but we'd be ugly as heck!
If you were Pocahauntas than i'll be John Smith
cuz your la princessita that my heart belongz with
If i was David Navarro Than you'd be Lupe Flores
together we could laugh away all of lifes Dolores.

 

[Mr Unique]

Its all right...like the creativity u added 2 it...but idk some parts seem 2 b a bit off...keep it up though... 1love

 

[lupe Flores]

me encanto I have tears in my eyes

 

[la_1_n_only]

lol....................i like it, i like them movies/cartoons...................lol, i think its your best yet.................lol.............im lovin it

 

[DoeMemba]

it was aight...i seen better from u

 

[la_1_n_only]

its the best he done.................it gots my fav cartoon, and jack and rose and yeah man.............come on...................its the best he done............imo.

 

[Lil Poet]

Thanx...

 

[Mr Unique]

its the best he done.................it gots my fav cartoon, and jack and rose and yeah man.............come on...................its the best he done............imo.

naw actually I think he's had better...but its aight 2...it has th ecreativity in it its just missing the depth...has a bit...not 2 much though and thats what makes it fall off a bit....

 

[M3XICAN_DIM3]

i love your poem especially the part about fiona n shrek theyre my fav couple out of all the ones you named

 

[**MiSS 5o9**]

AWWW I LIKE IT!!!
IT IS CREATIVE IT'Z REALLY NICE LIL POET IM LOVING IT!!!

 

[acuario5764]

i like it !!!!!!!!!

 

[la_brown_eyes]

HEY HOMIE I LIKE THIS POEM.....IM LOVE IN IT

 

[Wicked]

Damn!!! Papi you got some wicked ass skills~
Keep rep`n them rhymes. Mucho Respeto y Propitoz

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