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Pensamientos Mios

Lil Poet

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Sometimez i just write what i see, it helpz releive the pressure.........

Moma, Moma can't you see,
what this cold worlds done to me,
six packs, nickle sacks
chrome straps, fitted caps
a punch, a kick, sometimes a stab
over different colored ragz
loading clipz into guns
living quick, dieing young
Mexicanos, chicanos, vatoz locoz
fight against whites, black, and racist popo'z
Motherless children, Fatherless kids
"Sadgirl's" on drugs, "Diablo's" splittin' wigz
No one to trust, no one who cares
just hateful thoughts and judging stares
I'm just a poet with a passion for wordz
speaking from my soul were it hutrs,
a tiger thats earned every stripe i carry
i stared Death in his eyez, i wounder why he spared me.
Guess i was left to observe the earths destruction,
and witness this endless portrayal of morraless corruption.
Heavenly father, prepare me for battle
the serpent is amoung us i can here his tail raddle.
I wana be like Robin Hood
robbing rich snobz and giving back to the hood
i'd make it so we all driving Cadillac'z if i could.
Replace the gats and random acts of violence
I'll be the voice in the silence...............
 

Mr Unique

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Nice....I was feeling it fool...keep it up..1 love

Heavenly father, prepare me for battle
the serpent is amoung us i can here his tail raddle.
I wana be like Robin Hood
robbing rich snobz and giving back to the hood
i'd make it so we all driving Cadillac'z if i could.
Replace the gats and random acts of violence
I'll be the voice in the silence...............


fav part...
 

DoeMemba

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u know i can't hate...real recognizes real....this was nice, u kept an even structure..it wasn't fantastic in vocab and the imagery and description is ok..
i gave you feed..now u do the same punk.
 

la_brown_eyes

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Hey Mijo This Is Badass So Wats Up Why Have You Send Me A Mensage?????i've Been Waiting For You To Answer My Question
 
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